Fashionable Male
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 30 October 2025 at 8:48am
Topic: Fashionable Male
Posted By: PixelPuddle
Subject: Fashionable Male
Date Posted: 15 March 2012 at 12:09pm
I wanted to try something random & outside of my comfort zone so here it is: Overall I am pretty happy with it... something looks a bit funky about the right arm & chest. I'm having trouble working in that right lapel too. I had some issues with the eyes/glasses but think it's looking OK. All feed back is much appreciated. reference: http://images.thesartorialist.com/thumbnails/2012/02/samweb1.jpg - http://images.thesartorialist.com/thumbnails/2012/02/samweb1.jpg |
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Posted By: Partack
Date Posted: 15 March 2012 at 7:23pm
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Lookin' gooood brutha.
lol. I like it, but I would suggest maybe messing with the book he's clutching on to. I know you probably wanted to convey what he is holding, but the angle of it looks unnatural. (it's almost like he's about to drop it and is holding it to his leg) his head is also looking a tiny bit squarish (but not by much!), you might want to remove a single pixel on the right side somewhere either at the top of the hair or just where the forehead ends. Other than that, you've still got a solid black outline. which is fine for what it is, but you might want to consider colouring the outlines and experiment a little. But that's probably a matter of opinion so don't worry too much about it. Good job. =) |