Sky WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 14 June 2026 at 5:28am
Topic: Sky WIP
Posted By: Babble
Subject: Sky WIP
Date Posted: 22 March 2012 at 5:40am
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I was working on this little low-res drawing
I think something is missing for the composition so I'm looking for advices: 
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Replies:
Posted By: pwei
Date Posted: 22 March 2012 at 12:35pm
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There are certain technical details I really like about this -- the blue palette, the tree shape and the cloud textures.
I think it might work better if you move the sun someplace more noticeable (I didn't see it at first glance). Composition wise, you want to create an interesting visual dynamic in how the sun, relief and tree balance each other. The darker and lighter blues don't really work, nor does the green. You have an opportunity to use the texture of the sky to create movement and visual interest but as is right now it's not very interesting. |
Posted By: Partack
Date Posted: 22 March 2012 at 3:02pm
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Originally posted by pwei
Composition wise, you want to create an interesting visual dynamic in how the sun, relief and tree balance each other. The darker and lighter blues don't really work, nor does the green. You have an opportunity to use the texture of the sky to create movement and visual interest but as is right now it's not very interesting. I was going to say that.. U___U; Just kidding. Composition is one of my weakest points and have no idea what your piece needs.. just wanted to say i love the clouds. good luck! |