Wip - Yuri Boyka
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Topic: Wip - Yuri Boyka
Posted By: dorgao.
Subject: Wip - Yuri Boyka
Date Posted: 06 May 2012 at 2:33pm
Give me ideas to my new work, post edits and suggestions to colors, lineart and more.
sorry i'ma newbie in pixel art |
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Posted By: Mille
Date Posted: 06 May 2012 at 4:02pm
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Face is looking good and expressive, left arm seems ok while right one folds in a weird way which may it seems flat, and the hand is a bit small compared to the other one. Shoulders are of different size as well it seems. Also not a critique on the work itself but if you want advice on something it might be a good idea to give a few directions: is this guy going to be a single sprite, or put in a scene, fighting something else ? Also even if you're not sure at all what his legs are going to look like at this point a rough draft helps to situate him, just to let people know what you're up to, so they can suggest things. That may sound stupid but it would also makes it more appealing which will help to lure comments and critiques to you, as of now it seems a bit lost in all that white space. The more you give the more can be given back I'd say. Hope this edit helps somehow, just quick idea of how I'd present that. May absolutely not be for what you're looking, but at least it'll help you picture what I said...  ------------- Une signature? Comme Zorro ou Batman? |
Posted By: dorgao.
Date Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:57pm
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Originally posted by Mille Yes! is just single sprite
Face is looking good and expressive, left arm seems ok while right one folds in a weird way which may it seems flat, and the hand is a bit small compared to the other one. Shoulders are of different size as well it seems.Also not a critique on the work itself but if you want advice on something it might be a good idea to give a few directions: is this guy going to be a single sprite, or put in a scene, fighting something else ? Also even if you're not sure at all what his legs are going to look like at this point a rough draft helps to situate him, just to let people know what you're up to, so they can suggest things. That may sound stupid but it would also makes it more appealing which will help to lure comments and critiques to you, as of now it seems a bit lost in all that white space. The more you give the more can be given back I'd say.Hope this edit helps somehow, just quick idea of how I'd present that. May absolutely not be for what you're looking, but at least it'll help you picture what I said...
and the idea is good, i can make the fighter Yuri Boyka from the movie Undisputed 
This guy 
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Posted By: dorgao.
Date Posted: 06 May 2012 at 8:21pm
Well, this is the lineart that i make in the legs is good ? |
Posted By: Vaggelis
Date Posted: 07 May 2012 at 5:55am
| If you are going with a realistic anatomy, your anatomy is wrong everywhere. |
Posted By: dorgao.
Date Posted: 07 May 2012 at 5:58am
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Originally posted by Vaggelis I do not quite understand what you meant.
If you are going with a realistic anatomy, your anatomy is wrong everywhere. |
Posted By: Vaggelis
Date Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:01am
| I am talking about the anatomy of the body. |
Posted By: dorgao.
Date Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:05am
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Originally posted by Vaggelis oh! yes, But my goal would be to just make a remake of a character like a Jinn Style understand?
I am talking about the anatomy of the body. |
Posted By: Vaggelis
Date Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:13am
| What is a "Jinn Style"? |
Posted By: dorgao.
Date Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:23am
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Originally posted by Vaggelis This guy
What is a "Jinn Style"? http://www.pixeljoint.com/p/17621.htm |
Posted By: Vaggelis
Date Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:26am
| Okay. |