WIP (Help)
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=14410
Printed Date: 10 April 2026 at 2:38am
Topic: WIP (Help)
Posted By: Arnaldo
Subject: WIP (Help)
Date Posted: 22 May 2012 at 8:14pm
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hi guys... i have tried to make a pixel art about asterix but i didn't like the result... i wonna critics and first of all i wont HELP... i wonna now , what i need to do to complete this peace  |
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Posted By: Arnaldo
Date Posted: 23 May 2012 at 7:29am
| hellllllppppppp i wonna improve this peace |
Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 25 May 2012 at 5:46am
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First - dont post pixel art into the main gallery unless it's finished. When people see it there they'll assume it's a finished piece and perhaps wont bother with a WIP topic they see on it.
As for the image: the shading seems very pillow shaded. Not entirely, as you do have shadows and highlights that define some form, but you always bring it back to the medium color around the edges The other major problem i see is that the arms seem very noodly. He lacks shoulders for the most part, the arm on the left becomes this odd blob as it goes to fold under the other one - mostly that it bends at what should be a straight arm. The other arm is just a bend without a defined elbow. Look at some photos of people with their arms crossed (or yourself in a mirror) to get a better idea of how they should look |
Posted By: Arnaldo
Date Posted: 25 May 2012 at 6:24pm
| Thanks man, i like your coments, they really help peoples, i will Try To make it better... |