Untitled WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 April 2026 at 4:04am
Topic: Untitled WIP
Posted By: toxotes
Subject: Untitled WIP
Date Posted: 28 May 2012 at 11:49pm
Hey, could I get some feedback about this piece I'm currently working on? Some segments are more finished than others, and I'm wondering if it's working in the more developed areas. Any critique is welcome. Thanks
EDIT: Updated a little bit. |
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Posted By: toxotes
Date Posted: 29 May 2012 at 10:14pm
Update, and a fairly significant one:
Any feedback as I finish up this piece? Nitpick away :) |
Posted By: Mille
Date Posted: 31 May 2012 at 3:26pm
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No much to critique here, I can say that the composition isn't working that well though. A quick effective thing you could do would be to put that panel with the arm on the left and put it to the right, it should balance it.
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