Mysterious Meteor
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=14849
Printed Date: 25 February 2026 at 6:30pm
Topic: Mysterious Meteor
Posted By: Flazex
Subject: Mysterious Meteor
Date Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:04pm
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Hello again Pixel-Joint. It's been awhile, but I've been quite busy. I've studied up more on pixel art and realized on some of the things I've done wrong. I've began working on this piece I am about to present to you, but it's in the super early stages of development.
Here is the piece: 
One tree, smoking meteor, foggy background with some other objects to be "fogged out," and the vines hanging from the canopy and sitting on the tree trunk. Things I still need to do: -Add the crash area for the meteor(Such as the dirt and evidence of a pit) -Shading(Of course) -The craters on the meteor -Perhaps fix the grass color.. I'm looking to get as much feedback as I can. Even on this first current picture, I could use tips and guiding! |
Replies:
Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:36pm
| I think way tpp many beginners rush with preliminary rough sketches asking for feedback. Not sure how much this can be rewarding for any party involved. I recommend investing more time and effort before showing anything. |
Posted By: Flazex
Date Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:39pm
| I completely understand that, but I kind of would like to hear at least if the sketch is good enough currently. I'm currently working on a better version of this current one. |
Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:43pm
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IMO, the sketch is way underdeveloped. No crater, object size issues, weird smoke rendition.
Hardly usable for a decent looking pixel art work. I would start over, and maybe first concentrate on one detail, either a tree or a crater... |