EXITPIXEL
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 28 October 2025 at 12:05pm
Topic: EXITPIXEL
Posted By: exitpixel
Subject: EXITPIXEL
Date Posted: 13 January 2013 at 10:09pm
Hello, I am new to this forum. But would like to show my current pixel art/sprite comic, EXIT PIXEL. Join Johnny, Vii, Flare and more for an extensive travel through all of your favorite 8-bit video games.
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http://exitpixel.com/ - exitpixel.com http://twitter.com/exitpixel - @exitpixel |
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 13 January 2013 at 10:17pm
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Everybody has to start somewhere. I'll cut to the chase and tell you
these are really awful. The backgrounds are drab and do nothing to
describe the location, and the pixel work looks like sprite edits from
videogames? also the jokes aren't funny, to the point that I'm not really sure if there is a joke or not. the text is too large for the images as well, and colors in general are too saturated (other than the grey background, which needs some saturation). maybe post a few fully custom sprites or backgrounds so we have something focused to critique? Can't really tell what your pixelling level is. Also find a torrent for some Scott McCloud books or something to help out with the comics/story-telling aspect. |