game in space
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 June 2026 at 8:56pm
Topic: game in space
Posted By: megablast2
Subject: game in space
Date Posted: 01 March 2013 at 5:37am
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hello :), This is the first graphic for a zleda-like game in the space:). What do you think it?  |
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Posted By: crozier
Date Posted: 01 March 2013 at 2:44pm
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What do I think? Well the outline on the monsters/lazer light don't look that good. There is some pillowshading on the door. A few of the colors are drab looking, the hues and saturation just feel a little odd (ie whatever that purple thing is in the corner, and the lazer). Is this top-down or 3/4 view? The doors really throw off the perspective.
Oh and some floor tiles would be really nice. Loving the box and the red button btw. And welcome to pixeljoint! |
Posted By: megablast2
Date Posted: 02 March 2013 at 2:29pm
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Thanks for your poste :). For 'The doors really throw off the perspective' you say of all doors? |
Posted By: crozier
Date Posted: 02 March 2013 at 3:05pm
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The leftmost door is ok, but the upper and lower right ones (the ones leaning to the left and right) just feel odd.
Side note the rooms are kind of empty looking. |
Posted By: megablast2
Date Posted: 12 March 2013 at 9:09am
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hello :), I'm working the decors.  |
Posted By: DragonMarx
Date Posted: 12 March 2013 at 11:44am
| I really have to say that the addition of the green really made a difference! |
Posted By: showtime
Date Posted: 12 March 2013 at 11:49am
| That's a huge improvement perspective-wise, way less confusing |
Posted By: megablast2
Date Posted: 26 March 2013 at 7:40am
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Hello :), This is my wall :   |
Posted By: megablast2
Date Posted: 22 May 2013 at 5:31am
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hello :), The continuation :  |
Posted By: Stevie
Date Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:06pm
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I'm just a newbie here myself, but I really like what you have so far. Your style is great and I love the coloring. |
Posted By: ultimaodin
Date Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:34pm
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Looking good - the mapping is still a bit open but that'll come with more assets. It could use more of the space feel.
------------- The world is but a shadow of emotion, cast in shades of grey. |
Posted By: programgamer
Date Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:44pm
| You know what would make it have more of a space athmosphere? First, taller walls with big glass windows to give a feeling of, well, space! Second, you should make everything cluttered with wires and gadgets, make it feel techy and stuff. That's pretty much all I have to say other than good job on this one! |