Main dude
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Topic: Main dude
Posted By: Shon7291
Subject: Main dude
Date Posted: 06 April 2013 at 4:40pm
Hello all. I'm trying my hand at a hack and slash sidescroller and would love some C+C before I go any further.
This here is the main man that has no name.
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 06 April 2013 at 6:25pm
Nice and clean. My only crit is the strength of red color which can read as if he's wearing a girl's red bikini.
Ignore, if he's meant to be pervy.
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Posted By: showtime
Date Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:31pm
I feel like the arms could be a touch longer, right now they look like they only go down to the hip. And I agree with Jal about that red.
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Posted By: Shon7291
Date Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:10am
Round 2
Lengthened the arms by a pixel and dulled the red quite a bit. Once that bikini thing was pointed out, I couldn't not notice it and I had to change it. Haha
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Posted By: Friend
Date Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:47am
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looks good. Could use some shading to make it not so flat
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