Tongue Wip
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 16 November 2025 at 2:47am
Topic: Tongue Wip
Posted By: Marques_
Subject: Tongue Wip
Date Posted: 27 April 2013 at 6:35am
Could help me finish this pixel art? 
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 27 April 2013 at 7:24am
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First tip:
USE A REFERENCE! Always. Especially with anatomy you're unfamiliar with. The teeth are not little squares equal in size. The frontals tend to be larger, the canines pointy, etc. look at real teeth, replicate what you see. As it is, all of the teeth are way too small. And the tongue is so large it couldn't even fit in the mouth. Also use your references to achieve more naturalistic skin tones, desaturated purple-reds rather than fire engine red. |
Posted By: Marques_
Date Posted: 27 April 2013 at 7:46am
Improved teeth?
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 27 April 2013 at 3:51pm
| Better but still very off. Mind posting the reference you used?frontal incisors in particular are way too narrow, tongue is still massive. Given any thought to the background? |
Posted By: Bryroz
Date Posted: 27 April 2013 at 4:47pm
This was a very quick edit I did. I edited some of your colors. But, I noticed that some of them are not even used. Tongues still have alot of detail to them, I know that the one I made is perhaps a bit rough. Mostly because I rushed on it. But, try to keep in mind of where your light source is. And it appeared to be on the top of the canvas. But the teeth, back and front of the tongue kinda thew it off. Also, your piece needs some AA, which I would consider you look at this for help on that http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299 - http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299 Hope this helps you some more. And like what Cure was saying about the reference would be very helpful. |
Posted By: Marques_
Date Posted: 27 April 2013 at 6:53pm
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Originally posted by Bryroz
This was a very quick edit I did. I edited some of your colors. But, I noticed that some of them are not even used. Tongues still have alot of detail to them, I know that the one I made is perhaps a bit rough. Mostly because I rushed on it. But, try to keep in mind of where your light source is. And it appeared to be on the top of the canvas. But the teeth, back and front of the tongue kinda thew it off. Also, your piece needs some AA, which I would consider you look at this for help on that http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299 - http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299 Hope this helps you some more. And like what Cure was saying about the reference would be very helpful. Very good your edition. Thanks for tutorial. I intend to improve |