Floating Platforms
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 June 2026 at 10:04pm
Topic: Floating Platforms
Posted By: Juniorps
Subject: Floating Platforms
Date Posted: 17 May 2013 at 8:50am
Hello, I came here to ask you to help end this my pixel art, I can no longer carries it so I'm here e.e
Inspirations: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/75965.htm http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/67600.htm http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/10466.htm |
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Posted By: skittle
Date Posted: 17 May 2013 at 9:01am
| Pretty cute so far. I like the trees, very simplistic! |
Posted By: Juniorps
Date Posted: 17 May 2013 at 11:06am
| Thanks my dear :) |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 17 May 2013 at 11:20am
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Nice colors. Be extra clean with the lineart. Especially the treetops, k.
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Posted By: CraftyPixel
Date Posted: 17 May 2013 at 4:07pm
- Here, made an edit for you :P, I'd recommend fixing up the colors, and don't restrict yourself / limit yourself too much! saturation doesn't have to be too high or too low! - |
Posted By: Juniorps
Date Posted: 18 May 2013 at 5:38pm
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Thank you for editing really helped me a lot.
I made a draft following his edition does not know if it was really good because I'm fast running out of time I hope you have been good sketch. Before proceeding, I want you to see and want to know what you think I give a continuity of the waterfall into a river. 
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 19 May 2013 at 5:55am
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You could have the waterfall just land on another rock platform and make some sort of endless subtle loop animation of water in a sort of Escher-esque way ????
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Posted By: Juniorps
Date Posted: 19 May 2013 at 8:08am
I made some edits before you see the comment from @ Jalonso and here they are:
1.0 - 1.1 : I cleaned the lines and tried other colors. 2.O : I started working on the rocks. And here is the edition issued upon the edition of @ Jalonso: 
Particularly I really loved the idea What do you think? And what did you think about the waterfall being born a girl crying and random animations like the boat coming to post loads and boy practicing some kind of dance? |
Posted By: Numberplay
Date Posted: 19 May 2013 at 8:20am
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Waterfalls don't end up in rivers with the same size. They create some kind of reservoir much bigger than their size. I think you should make those waterfalls much smaller and make the lower area more like a round lake instead of 2 rivers mixing together.
Also the building on top have a strange shape. The roof is the part that bugs me most. It shouldn't look like that from that point of view. |
Posted By: ultimaodin
Date Posted: 19 May 2013 at 8:30am
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Make your bottom platform large and have the ground indented slightly with a large pool of water. Put a boat rowing in circles in the lake/pool if you can. Also, when you start fleshing this out make certain to have some of the grass lap over the cliff/rock-base in blades. The girl crying is cool; however, I'd move her platform directly abov the initial flow of water so it's actually plausible (as plausible as that concept can be anyway) ------------- The world is but a shadow of emotion, cast in shades of grey. |