Suit
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=16374
Printed Date: 06 September 2025 at 7:17am
Topic: Suit
Posted By: philippejugnet
Subject: Suit
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:20pm
hey ya guys! :) ~~IM BACK~~ any comments? http://riot-web-static.s3.amazonaws.com/images/news/February_2013/02_14_2003_Debonair_Jayce/Jayce_Debonair_Splash.jpg - ref |
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Posted By: yaomon17
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:28pm
| his chin is too square and large. His nose is also a bit small. Ear is slightly too big. Other than that seems fine. |
Posted By: CraftyPixel
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 7:02pm
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- Love it! , Yeah... his face seems a bit off for this specific scene. But this is really good for a start! -( make a suspicious face ;P ) |
Posted By: King of Games
Date Posted: 21 May 2013 at 9:17pm
| Love the colors, the dude looks like JGL from Looper, but yeah his head is too big. |
Posted By: philippejugnet
Date Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:11pm
ty guys! :) is this looking better?
I was thinking about adding http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/69252.htm - a gun to his left hand but a3um had that idea already D: so, what do you guys think? edit: by looking at it now the position looks like im copying him :S i might change it |
Posted By: RileyFiery
Date Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:22pm
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I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar. |
Posted By: philippejugnet
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:33pm
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Originally posted by RileyFiery
I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar. ah, i'm glad it doest look like his, because i dont want people saying crap about my work. does this work ? :D 
edit: http://www.elfwood.com/art/j/o/jozh91//guns_nd_swords.jpg - REF I USED FOR THE GUN ( i dont know much about guns nor gun designs D: ) |
Posted By: Numberplay
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:57pm
| What if he holds a light source in his other hand? |
Posted By: philippejugnet
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:26pm
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Originally posted by Numberplay
What if he holds a light source in his other hand? maybe a lantern? i'll try sketching it here ;) ty for sharing buddy :D |
Posted By: RileyFiery
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:52pm
| Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind. |
Posted By: philippejugnet
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:23pm
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Originally posted by RileyFiery
Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind. whaaat D: there are no barrels in the picture, unless there is something else called barrel and I am not aware of. wip update btw :) 
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Posted By: Numberplay
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:34pm
| The barrel of a gun. |
Posted By: DoctorDRG
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:57am
| I would angle the gun more towards the floor or add some more space to the left side of the canvas. |
Posted By: Friend
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:58am
| the entire anatomy looks off. The angle of the face seems really weird and off from the turn of his neck, which is also off with the perspective of the body making him look like he's doing a strange contortion. The direction of his eyes also seem to be backwards with the tilt of his head. The facial features are WAY WAY too small, even for me, and my facial features are tiny. The original ear size was natural, around 1/4 to slightly larger of the head is normal ear size. The other facial features also need serious resizing. Check facial feature proportions of a male adult. His right arm/shoulder region is incredibly awkward and unnatural |
Posted By: philippejugnet
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 11:17am
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decided to remove the gun~~
In the final stages already ;D 
edit: just read your comment friend ill try to read a little bit about it, i wasnt sure about the arm, since you meantioned im going to change it :) edit: from your critique, this is what I changed, idk what is wrong with the arm but doesnt look good, ill make another edit with the changes in the arm 
arm edit: guess this looks way better :D just have to fix some of the AA and some shapes :) 
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Posted By: skittle
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 2:20pm
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Oh boy... you work fast.
This is looking pretty awesome though! Definitely gonna fav this when it's done. |
Posted By: philippejugnet
Date Posted: 26 May 2013 at 6:59am
calling it done friends :)
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/78241.htm - link |