Sci fi Pilot
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 June 2026 at 10:04pm
Topic: Sci fi Pilot
Posted By: hellotherekyle
Subject: Sci fi Pilot
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:16pm
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Hey people this is my first post here, and only my fourth piece of pixel art I've ever made. If anyone could help me out with anything I've done wrong or should change it'd be much appreciated! Also, how are his proportions so far? I've only put a few hours into it so far and I plan on adding a lot more detail with shading and such.
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Posted By: Stevie
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:23pm
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Oh my god what is this crap?!? Just kidding, what's up Kyle? Looks good so far, though I'll let the veterans on here do the proper critiquing. One thing I'll say, you're way better at drawing the human figure than I am. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:23pm
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You are off to a great start. Anatomy is more that fine and that is key. If anything the chest is far too straight on as indicated by the arms. Design wise a 3/4 face might be more interesting than a side view? ------------- |
Posted By: hellotherekyle
Date Posted: 24 May 2013 at 8:50am
| Thanks Jalonso, I'll keep working on it and try to draw a head in 3/4, good idea! And Steve, I dunno about that. . You're an excellent artist. |
Posted By: hellotherekyle
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 11:06am
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So I've animated him a little bit. The reason I kept his head at the side is cause I was kinda thinking of putting him into a 2D sidescroller, so he should be looking sideways (I think?).
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Posted By: Stevie
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 6:03pm
| That look great Kyle. Can't wait to see more. |
Posted By: hellotherekyle
Date Posted: 25 May 2013 at 7:09pm
| Thanks Steve, I'll try to work on it some more tomorrow! |