Feedback on my Walrus
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 15 June 2026 at 6:57am
Topic: Feedback on my Walrus
Posted By: mrspixel
Subject: Feedback on my Walrus
Date Posted: 19 June 2013 at 3:38pm
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Hello.
So I'm new to the board and I came here to improve my pixeling skills like the others. Right now I'm working on a sprite sheet for this walrus I made; however, I need feedback. Here he is... 
Thanks! |
Replies:
Posted By: Nppsf
Date Posted: 19 June 2013 at 4:47pm
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The coloring looks really good.
I think the shape of the animal is kind of weird. Like the head is really big, and the tail and flippers arent well defined. Looks cool though! |
Posted By: Kurieta
Date Posted: 19 June 2013 at 6:33pm
| Personally I would make the tusks a few pixels longer. But either way, it looks awesome :) |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 20 June 2013 at 7:17am
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Could use a little more contrast, and the dithering is unnecessary. light source is pretty indeterminate. |