Zack II
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 07 September 2025 at 4:33am
Topic: Zack II
Posted By: reis
Subject: Zack II
Date Posted: 28 July 2013 at 7:02pm
Green colors by jamon Reff by slym Tips? |
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Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 29 July 2013 at 7:31pm
EDIT 2 - palette by slym |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:15pm
EDIT 3 - I packed some things |
Posted By: Blainertyr
Date Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:48pm
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I just would like to say this is beautiful. Continue the AMAZING WORK. You might want to change the ground, the gray, a little bit more to match with the backround.
EDIT: I'm not very good, if you enjoy your portrait the way it is, don't listen to me.I'm not to speak considering I'm new to this forum. |
Posted By: RileyFiery
Date Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:53pm
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I think a texture of some sort on the back of the tree would help a lot. http://">  |
Posted By: shampoop
Date Posted: 05 August 2013 at 1:01pm
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I would lower your saturation values of the brown you use for your bark. |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 4:51pm
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Thanks for the tips.
I made a small edit changing the colors to reduce saturation 
I did not like it, I'm looking for a new palette ... |
Posted By: Oriena
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 5:09pm
| I think I actually like the first picture's color theme a lot. |
Posted By: Muxaun
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 5:17pm
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At first glance it reads like blades stuck in ground - not like forest.
Initial color scheme was better. Distant tree trunks should blend into blue sky. Also distant trees shall look smaller then foreground ones. Therefore the foliage of distant trees shall be lower (currently it looks like distant trees are becoming higher and higher with distance). |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 06 August 2013 at 5:30pm
-- New update -- with Sohei palette |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:12pm
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Any tips?
--- New update 
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Posted By: Neonman
Date Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:59am
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Hi! Looking good underBoss! :) Has a charming feel to it :) What I would suggest is to have some branches coming off the trunks to break up to lines and enhance the feeling of depth to your level artwork. I've done a quick overdraw to show you what I mean. All the best! Neonman.  |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:03pm
| @Neonman Many thanks for the edit, I will definitely use this edit. Thank you very much! |
Posted By: Neonman
Date Posted: 05 September 2013 at 7:47am
| You're welcome! Keep up the awesome work! :D |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 30 September 2013 at 6:48pm
Little edit... I add rocks and refined, Neonman. Thank u |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 07 October 2013 at 3:07pm
Finish!!! |