Sanity
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 16 December 2025 at 7:18am
Topic: Sanity
Posted By: Monsoon2D
Subject: Sanity
Date Posted: 14 March 2006 at 4:27pm
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I don't post WIPs very often. This is a picture that I've been working on at the office. Not the most vibrant and colorful piece, but it's heavy with aa. There are a few trouble areas that I'm already addressing. Critque if you'd like. This WIP will only be posted here. When the piece is finished, I'll provide a step-by-step animation. Oh. And it's 12 colors. I may add one or two more.  |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 14 March 2006 at 5:18pm
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That's beautiful, and the colors are greta for this subject matter. I
only have a problem with the clouds looking too asian to fit in
perfectly
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Posted By: Monsoon2D
Date Posted: 14 March 2006 at 5:22pm
| Very fair, jalonso. The piece is going to be very surreal, so they may or may not stay in there. They might look neat if they clash properly (if that makes any sense). It's also going to be freakin' huge. I'm shooting for 800 x 600 or larger. |
Posted By: Blick
Date Posted: 14 March 2006 at 5:40pm
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There's something about his arms that just don't feel right to me. The
way they overlap his body look strange, I think it is. Like his
shoulders are stemming a bit from his chest, rather than the sides. It
is possible to move your arms like that, but it just looks
uncomfortable. Then again, it sort of fits in because it seems like
he's being constricted or trapped which seems to be a bit of theme
going on in the piece so far with the tubes tangling him. I guess my comment doesn't help anything at all, I just like to ramble. ------------- http://punaji.com/"> 
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Posted By: Monsoon2D
Date Posted: 14 March 2006 at 5:44pm
| Nope. Very valid comment, Blick. I think that when I add more wrinkles to the shirt, it'll help to make him look more relaxed. I'll play with the shoulders more as the time comes. Thank you. |