Fat Guy apartment
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: The Joint
Forum Discription: Post your WIPs, ideas and anything else to do with the massive isometric apartment project.
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=1853
Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 2:16pm
Topic: Fat Guy apartment
Posted By: moggy
Subject: Fat Guy apartment
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 8:38am
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hi i am making this apartment for the joint of a man who has rather induldged himself.
I have put in a lot of food but i seem to have alot of empty floor still left and would appreciate any c+c or ideas about what to contain.
PS i have had to use another computer to make this post as whenever i try to log in on mine it says i have a cookie problem. If anyone could help me sort this out i would be very pleased thanks |
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 9:37am
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Ooh, hum, you should have a huuuge stack of pizza boxes by the door. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:12am
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It's really funny and the details are good. It may just be the colors
of the floor and walls that make it seem empty. The walls in particular
could use some aging too, like he's too busy eating to clean up (door
too). If you need another detail, how about a trash bin filled with
wrappers, it would add some height and dimension if placed near the
corner.
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Posted By: Revenant
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 11:55am
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About your cookie problem, try to change your security options in your browser options. Sometimes they keep the pages from creating cookies, that is nothing more then a small text file with a lil bit of information. About your work, it's really a nice idea, but what about a freezer? Maybe the room could be a kitchen ^^ |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 1:01pm
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yeah, or kitchen-esque. I vote for still-life oil paintings of fruit and cheese and wine on the walls. and maybe some lurid wallpaper with dancing fruit on it or something? ------------- www.semesteratsea.com |
Posted By: Dra_chan
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 2:39pm
| His right arm looks a bit short, or maybe it's just me. The food looks great. |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 3:15pm
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or you could pretend this guy is a bum and just put a sleeping bag in the big open part. problem solved. ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 4:30pm
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Originally posted by Saiklor ...still-life oil paintings of fruit and cheese and wine on the walls. and maybe some lurid wallpaper with dancing fruit on it... perfect  ------------- |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 7:48pm
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you've got the food, but where are all the wrappers and stuff from yesterday? it is much too neat for a fat guy with a room full of food. And yeah, I love Saiklor's idea |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 9:40pm
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how about a maid cleaning up the mess? he can be a really f**king rich awful glutton. ------------- www.semesteratsea.com |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:32pm
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How many post does it take Saiklor to go from genius to retard? 5 ------------- |
Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 2:39am
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A big pile of junk would be nice with flies swirling around it. I also
like the idea with the oil paintings and the sleeping bag.
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 4:31am
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Sleeping bag sounds good snader. Or could just have a quilt with more junk piled up inside it... lol. ------------- http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: moggy
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 8:48am
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thanks for all the suggestions guys- i agree it does look too clean and i think ill add some changes to the walls aswell. while i do this i mite think of putting some slight animation in e.g. flies or summin wat do u think thanks again for the ideas
btw i fixed my cookie problem lol summin to do with the temporary folder being full |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 12:18pm
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Jalonso I'm not sure what you're getting at.
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 12:52pm
No offense meant Saikor. I loved your picture/wallpaper idea but hated
the maid one. It was an attempt at saying that with humor, guess I
failed 
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Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 1:52pm
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yeah maid would suck, i think just make him an average joe homer
simpson esque character. ------------- Snark, we love yuu. |
Posted By: moggy
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:02am
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Hi sorry i havent updated but ive been realy quite busy lol. As for the pic i have added some pics on teh wall and im working on a pile of rubbish as i speak lol. Heres what the pic looks like at the moment so keep up the great C+C guys.
EDIT: Well it turned out the bin wasnt working to well but then i was randomly drawing and i came up witht he idea that the guy( or his wife lol) was too fat he broke the floor!. Then voila- here was the outcome-
Obviuously there is still abit of space to fill and im still looking for ideas lol but what do u think of this idea? |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:03am
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HIS right arm is way too short. ------------- Snark, we love yuu. |
Posted By: moggy
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:34am
| Oh yer i noticed that aswell now * trys to fix* thnx |
Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 1:11pm
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He ATE his ARM... ------------- 
I am the jesus of PJ. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:00pm
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WOW its looking great. The hole in the floorboards is genious.
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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 08 June 2006 at 8:54am
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Originally posted by jalonso WOW its looking great. The hole in the floorboards is genious. He.. had a room mate  ------------- |
Posted By: moggy
Date Posted: 12 June 2006 at 10:07am
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UPDATE: I think ive sorted his arm but feel free to correct me there. Its nearly getting on i just need to finish off filling the space. Still looking for C+C. Oh and btw i thought about playing around with shadows how does the one behind the man look? |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 June 2006 at 5:57pm
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Yes, you need shadows everywhere. I would now consider getting rid of
all the black outlining on the room itself (don't forget where the
floor meets the walls. Make the door a darker color so the pizza box in
the mail slot stands out too.
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Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 14 June 2006 at 12:27pm
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It looks great, but I'd change the color of the door. Make it "pop" a bit more, without the black outlines. ------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |
Posted By: moggy
Date Posted: 15 June 2006 at 8:46am
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UPDATE:
Thanks for the advice- I followed most of it and heres what i came up with. I tryed abit of shadowing but i dunno how it turned out. ONce ive filled in the gaps i think i will be ready to upload it. Thanks and feel free to offer any more advice. |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 15 June 2006 at 9:10am
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its probably gallery-fit already... but please do continue to work this
XD ------------- Snark, we love yuu. |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 15 June 2006 at 12:14pm
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I think you should animate those eyes in the hole, make them blink or something
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Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 15 June 2006 at 8:56pm
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Originally posted by Ensellitis
I think you should animate those eyes in the hole, make them blink or something That would definetly meakes this even funnier. You have 666 posts... creepy. ------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |
Posted By: moggy
Date Posted: 08 July 2006 at 7:34am
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Well I've animated the eyes....adequately i spose lol and i think i am going to submit this as I haven't really got any inspiration for things to add lol. thanks for all that critted and heres the final version-
EDIT: wait there is something dodgy with the edges lol when i have fixed that i will upload it. |
Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 08 July 2006 at 7:43am
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Very funny animation. Looks great, I would definatly suggest submiting now.. nothing more you can add..
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