Saw Room
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: The Joint
Forum Discription: Post your WIPs, ideas and anything else to do with the massive isometric apartment project.
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=1854
Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 11:20pm
Topic: Saw Room
Posted By: Revenant
Subject: Saw Room
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 11:44am
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Here we go. My contribution to The Joint. I'm not yet happy with the result, maybe it needs more detail, or some fix in the colors....crits welcome. |
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 12:01pm
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it's looking really clean, try to add some poo stains and stuff near the toilet, rust arounmd the pipes, more obvious cracks in the floor, and some dents and rust in the door =) ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 12:59pm
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I haven't seen the movie but I HAVE seen a white tiled floor, and they
usually have a cast of some colour, white, blue, pink, green. This
would appear mostly in the shadows. also, the guy sitting, his arm is too short unless his shoulder is uncomfortably high, which is isn't showing as it's not covering part of his face. Make a bend in his arm to make it the right length. ------------- www.semesteratsea.com |
Posted By: Revenant
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 1:40pm
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Thanks for the comments, I tried some of the suggestions: the door, floor, pipes and toilete is a bit more dirty, but about the arm of the sitting guy, i've choosen to raise the shoulder, and made a longer arm. Maybe the door details are too strong, but I want to keep the quantity of the colors controlled, dunno...should I change it? |
Posted By: Dra_chan
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 2:37pm
| That movie was great! The grey things besides of the guy in the floor are shadows? They should be smaller. And also, they guys should have the chain around the ankle. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:33pm
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The blood around the head is too pointy, it should be flowy.
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 4:25am
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Tone down the saturation in the people, and was the insane killer guy wearing GREEN SHORTS!? Didn't notice that... Um yes, i think it all looks too light. In the movie it's dark, dank, and clostraphobic [sp?]. The walls were more brown than white ... i thought. Nice one so far though. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Revenant
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 9:40am
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Thanks for all comments and crits, I'll try to implement them all. Larwick, the shorts was gray, but since almost the entire room is gray, I decided to make it the same green of the door, but you're right, maybe it makes the scene more "happy", what absolutely is not the intention. jalonso, I'll change that, with pointy blood in the floor, it seems that he died with a concussion of the head in the ground, and it's not what happened. Dra_chan, yeah, the movie is great indeed, one of my favourites btw, sorry for my bad english ^^ |
...about the shadows, what you meant? The only dark things near the guys are the pipes and the craks/dirty of the walls/ground, maybe I dont make this elements as explicit as it should be :(Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:21am
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The people look too clean, try making them a bit grungy. ------------- 
I am the jesus of PJ. |
Posted By: alkaline
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 12:38pm
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The toilet seat part isn't in exact isometric perspective with everything else. I like what you've done, but yeah, they have spotless white shirts on. |
Posted By: Revenant
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:27pm
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Woah, thank you all guys, with your help I'm every time more satisfied with my work...here's the last update: same objects:
chains, box removed:
As Larwick sugested, I lowed the saturation of the lil dudes and turn the shorts of the "corpse" back to the original color About jalonso's sugestion, here's the "flowly" blood, a loot better indeed For Souly and alkaline comments, here's the dirty shirts, though the toilet was really a problem...actually I have no idea in how to make it seem better About the chains that Dra_chan remembered, here they are |
...and to be honest, I made a copy of it's shape from the "corner" template, since I'm not yet able to make good round isometric things...I think i'm a outlaw now 
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:37pm
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Looking great. I think you're almost done now, but first try to make your own toilet. "and to be honest, I made a copy of it's shape from the "corner" template" (Don't do that again, you can do it, its an oval and a box) I commend you for coloring the outer wall (frame) part, this is often ommited (me). ps. For your next pixelart I suggest your own original avatar. ------------- |
Posted By: Revenant
Date Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:34pm
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Yeah, you're right about the toilet, i'm feeling so ashamed "ps. For your next pixelart I suggest your own original avatar." ...actually it was my intention, though I have no idea what to do...maybe I'm in a personality crisis! and for the outter wall, you mean the original room template color? thanks again for all the help and patience |
I really dont want to think, think, think, and finish by making a pixel art cube 