I was bored and so decided to start on another, seeing as i had so much fun before. Yep, it's a robot. Very sketchy stages at the moment. I'm planning on having his lower arms like large cylinders, with large hands at the end. I'm not sure about the face yet, but it should be quite interesting.

Which pose do you prefer? If the second one, what should its other arm be doing? Also, crit about any other niggles you see.

Alright, sweet. it does sort of look cooler. I've added some better hands and they look much better on the first (at least i think).

(And yeah i'm sort of rushing through this a bit... but hey)

Awesome idea Souly, i'll try that.

What does everyone think of the head? Where should the eyes go? At the moment i'm thinking on the crease...

Ok, although i do want this to have mainly my input... I am stumped at what colourscheme i should do it in..

Thanks all. And yes, i was going to fix the problem of the shoulders, but hey.

I decided to make a few more concepts, and this is what i came up with. His waist is a bit buggered up but i'll fix that another time. And if there's weird curves in the joints, just imagine it's bendy material, not metal.

It's friggin huge now, im not sure whether i should add a head, or just go back to the old one.

Yeah Blick, it's a good idea. I think i might go with that. ^_^

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Here we go, i went along the lines, and gave it a semi-head thing.
 "CRUSH, KILL, WEDGIE RYU..."

Yeah, those are sherbert sticks on his shoulders. LIGHTNING SHERBERT STICKS.

Shall i add another hue to it... or is this enough?

How about jade? It might sorta take away the menacingness though...

What do its wrist/lower arms remind you of? Oh and yes i tried snot green. Horrific.

Gee, i feel so sad editing my post with all these updates. I just dont like bumping, i guess.

Haha, good point jalonso. I was thinking earlier the legs didnt suit the body, but hey, i do quite like it. I might edit the feet later on to see if i can fix the high heel problem. And hey, it's an it, not a he.

I'll also take your advice on the lighting.

I'm loving how it's going.
The head you chose is absolutly perfect.

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 Just fixed the hand and stuff...

And thanks guys, and i will be doing all the sellout and aaing later ^_^ Unless of course i prefer it having an outline..

Thankyuu! ^_^

More updates:

 I've added some dithering to the chest area, does it look ok? It looks ok for me, but through experience i've noticed people finding random dithering a bit odd. Hopefully it should give more depth to the metal plate - soft abdomen area. Next i'll do the feet.

Ah, thats good.
Just for the moment, i've decided to get rid of the sparks just to show everyone everything else in what i think could be the almost finished version.

I still might change the feet, and have to do a tad more sellout etc. Also, theres the electricity and lighting from it to overcome...

Gah, i definetely need the electricity, it looks like it's waving otherwise...

Could you point out where your lighsource is?
I'm looking at the feet and it looks like there's two lightsources...

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do that one.. its better

Lol yes, unless i find myself dying of boredom more than usual one day i dont think i'll be bothering to finish the older draft such as that one Sibix.

Well, i think i've finished. At least, i won't be obsessing over it any longer, so if there's anything you think should be changed it's unlikely i'll bother, for a while at least (unless i'm missing its leg or something) to change it.

I thought i'd be amusing and rack up a quick little animation for ya'lls to see how i made it with:

Ok, so less critisism now, more comments and personal likes/dislikes, although its probably best to be doing that in the gallery, so get in there! ^_^