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Wolverine Fighter Sprite

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Topic: Wolverine Fighter Sprite
Posted By: Shark
Subject: Wolverine Fighter Sprite
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 8:48am
something i made in about 2 maybe 2.5 hours when my internet was
down.


crit me1

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Posted By: Fhqwhgads
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 8:50am
His left arm is a little...weird :P

Its like bending back


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Posted By: Andy Tran
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:04pm
 It's a right arm Fhg. Yeah, it should be fixed. Something to shape up here is you might want to look at the arm's light source. Looks like the light source is below it. 


Posted By: Fhqwhgads
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:10pm
Originally posted by Andy Tran

 It's a right arm Fhg. Yeah, it should be fixed. Something to shape up here is you might want to look at the arm's light source. Looks like the light source is below it. 


Left to me, right to him :P


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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 5:21pm
Both of his arms seem a bit weird. Reference pictures needed perhaps?

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Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:01pm
The arm attaches above the shoulder on your pic. It's popin' outta his neck like one of those frogs that was exposed to nuclear waste.

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Posted By: fatal1ty
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:45pm
his feet look pretty big IMO.. arms are a little strange.
nice colouring though


Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:41pm
I really like what you did with the pants... but like the rest said - still plenty of fixing to do.
Something I noticed: the second lightsource (blue-greenish) kind of makes it look like he's wearing a turtle shell on his back
It might just be me though.


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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:44pm
Wolverine has four boobs 

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Posted By: RealQMark
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:17pm
My crits pretty much have to do with the right arm. It looks unatural. Mainly because the bend on the wrist and how high the arm seems into the shoulder. If you were to tilt it forward a bit and clean up the black line between the chest and the bicep, I think it should to the trick. Heads also seems just a tiny bit smaller than it should be.

I love the detail on the pants though. :P


Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 14 April 2006 at 2:57am
i think ill redraw the top half, and his left foot. altho i do like his left
arm. i think ill give him a more fighter stane with his right arm bent

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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 14 April 2006 at 6:53pm

his left foot looks like a right foot.

the head is too small and the hands appear to be turned outwards



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