Sci-Fi Soldier
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 15 June 2026 at 5:35am
Topic: Sci-Fi Soldier
Posted By: BathMaster_2000
Subject: Sci-Fi Soldier
Date Posted: 13 November 2014 at 6:08am
I've been working on this guy for a couple hours now.
Any things glaring that I need to fix? |
Replies:
Posted By: DrTripwire
Date Posted: 13 November 2014 at 8:01am
| I think there could be a bit more contrast, as well as a bit of fiddling with the left - our right - leg. Not sure if it would be so turned out. Other than that, not bad! I like the mostly-monochrome look. |
Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 13 November 2014 at 8:10am
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The forms are hard to read because it looks like you're shading each shape as its own thing instead of connected body parts. Think of each arm as a bent cylinder, same for each leg. You can think of the knees as sort of like ball joints - they should continue the highlights of the parts they connect instead of being in shadow. |
Posted By: Limes
Date Posted: 13 November 2014 at 12:18pm
| Colors seem flushed out make that a VERY bright blue. |