small Doggy Lineart.
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 11 October 2022 at 3:32pm
Topic: small Doggy Lineart.
Posted By: Dutrho
Subject: small Doggy Lineart.
Date Posted: 01 May 2006 at 6:43am
    any CC? ------------- Mmmm.. Thats good placebo! |
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 1:02am
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Aww, I think it's quite cute. It doesn't look too bad, but I think his head shouldn't be so high and lower and more to your right. Did you look at any ref pics?
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Posted By: Omegavolt
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 6:24am
I would probably lower the arch in its back as well. Unless youre shooting for a cartoony look. 
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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 7:18am
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Updated. I lowered the head and back by one pixel. ------------- Mmmm.. Thats good placebo! |
Posted By: Omegavolt
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 8:51am
| No no, I mean the arch needs to become... um... un-arched. Instead of making its back so curved, make it a little straighter. |
Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 9:22am
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Updated again. reshaped the curve on the back and lowered the head by another pixel. ------------- Mmmm.. Thats good placebo! |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 10:11am
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It seems the front legs are not in the right perspective. Eother left leg longer or rihjt leg shorter? <3 the head
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Posted By: Omegavolt
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 11:52am
Just add more length to the inside line of the right side leg so that it ends a little closer to his ear. 
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Posted By: Dra_chan
Date Posted: 02 May 2006 at 12:56pm
| Aaaaaah! A labrador retriever puppy! :3 :3 |
Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 03 May 2006 at 8:36am
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Updated* tried to fix the legs, any better?
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