Space Ship (WIP)
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 30 September 2025 at 1:24pm
Topic: Space Ship (WIP)
Posted By: Fugitive
Subject: Space Ship (WIP)
Date Posted: 04 May 2006 at 4:26pm
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I could do with some C&C
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 04 May 2006 at 5:05pm
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Up yer contrast, mate! ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
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Posted By: Bifur
Date Posted: 04 May 2006 at 5:07pm
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make some more deth ligthing
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 04 May 2006 at 5:36pm
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Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom
Up yer contrast, mate! Where ??
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I need some sleep 
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 04 May 2006 at 5:42pm
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Between shades. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
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Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 04 May 2006 at 7:59pm
Make some of them anime glowey eye obs on it please! Maybe add some glass and lights. Giive it some mechanical interest. Yay for space fighters. YOu might also want to think of defining these areas on the design. What is the scale? to set the scale you need to make some elemints that tell the size of the ship.Also what is it's means of propulsion and defence. Right now it looks the equivelent of a metal potato. Good start. ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/"> 
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 4:10am
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Need more work!! http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/797/spaceshipv35wk.png">
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Posted By: Di0xygen
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 4:40am
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Its looks very flat. you shoul try and make the sides shade wider, to give a more round effect. make the interior black line less dark, and sellout the countours. Should make it have more depth. Also when doing something like that, try to imagine the shape in 3d. imagine the use of everything. if you put a line in the middle for some odd reason have it have a reason. cause right now i looks like nothing really, and the shading is wayy off.. yet it could be waaaay on, i simply dont know what the hell it is  ------------- c==3 |
Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 5:10am
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Why did you remove the updated picture? It looked already better than
the original... still could benefit from some cockpit and maybe some
worn company or group logo and a few dirty spots that make it look used.
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 5:32am
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Originally posted by Dennis Busch
Why did you remove the updated picture? It looked already better than the original... still could benefit from some cockpit and maybe some worn company or group logo and a few dirty spots that make it look used. Because it needs a lot of work... Anyway heres the NEW lineart...
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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 9:29am
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Don't make the whole thing one color this time. D: ------------- 
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Posted By: cosmic4z
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 12:13pm
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Looks a bit 'flat' to me. I like the sides to be a darker colour, also, maybe if you shade is so it's different on left and right sides. Not just flipped! :) ------------- PRO Game Developer: www.jamiewoodhouse.co.uk Tools For Making Maps: www.gbatools.com |
Posted By: Bifur
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 12:46pm
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dont make shades flat like u did before
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Posted By: Di0xygen
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 4:22pm
 Jus some basic colors, to show how you can add volume and depth by only having a nice color and shade placement to simulate 3d i also modified the shape a bit, loots better that way imo. since i could not understand where you were going with the one you had. hope this helps you understand a bit more what i said by try to understand the basic shapes of your image and build the colors around that ------------- c==3 |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 06 May 2006 at 2:36pm
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I edited your palette a little, your colors are too simular. They change shades too slowly in my opinion http://imageshack.us"> ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/">
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Posted By: Setzer
Date Posted: 06 May 2006 at 2:49pm
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OSHT PO =D that wins.
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 1:05am
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Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw
I edited your palette a little, your colors are too simular. They change shades too slowly in my opinion http://imageshack.us/"> Yeah! it's only a little bit different from my version that I sent you, but it looks good...
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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 1:46am
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That's it, the outline looks softer and smoother. Good work on the body. you might want to add detail to the windows? ------------- |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 5:12am
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Can I still add the one I did to my gallery? or should I add P_O edit... ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: inkspot
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 11:10am
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Its, uh, dull... Plain colours, put some texture on it, some dirt spots from battle, a ships name, scratches, texture of metal and make the cokpit a bit visual through the glass shell. Loose the black colour, replace it with some another dark tone, AA it. ------------- 
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 4:48pm
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The black lines are a little too much with the silver contrast colors. I'd suggest, if you're going to go with the higher contrast, to lighten the black to a different color.
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 9:48am
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Small update... I've used three colors from P_O edit (Windows)
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 10:06am
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Looking much better. Still got some dark lines that need removing though. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 1:38pm
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Originally posted by Larwick
Looking much better. Still got some dark lines that need removing though. What the black line around the windows ? ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 1:44pm
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I think it looks too much like "The Car of the Future" add some space things plz. ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/">
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 2:20pm
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It looks like a ejected cockpit from a huge freighter. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 3:06pm
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Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw
I think it looks too much like "The Car of the Future" add some space things plz. Like what ? ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 3:16pm
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guns, satelites, wateva u think it shood have. google some already
existing shmups for ideas. ------------- Snark, we love yuu. |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 5:00pm
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Yes what I meant is that it looks like more of a last resort escape pod. ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/">
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 2:36am
How big would the mother ship need to be...  *run away*------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 3:36am
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I agree that a small satellite dish or antenna is a must (for communication), but guns shouldn't be obligatory. It could well be just a civilian transport vessel or maybe an industrial working craft, in which case a mining drill or some grappling hooks would be nice. Either way, guns or no guns, I think the panels on the front fit nicely to attach the additional features to, or even to hide the features beneath them and make them come out when needed. [edit] P.S.: Don't forget the propulsion "fire". ;) ------------- http://www.dennisbusch.de/index.php - 0xDB | https://twitter.com/dennisbusch_de - twitter |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 12 May 2006 at 2:35am
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Someone said that it looks like the escape craft from the movie Alien. Anyway I did the propulsion "fire" but it don't look right!
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 12 May 2006 at 3:34am
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You must have exhaust ports! ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 13 May 2006 at 3:25am
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Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom
You must have exhaust ports! How did I miss them ?? ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 13 May 2006 at 6:20am
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I'm not liking those guns, if i were you i'd tone them down and put them right on the front, rather than ruining the streamlined sides. ------------- http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 13 May 2006 at 6:43am
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Originally posted by Larwick
I'm not liking those guns, if i were you i'd tone them down and put them right on the front, rather than ruining the streamlined sides. I'll try putting them on the front now.. Should I make them small and change the color ?? ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |