Poem/ Rap (Unfinished)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 8:01pm
Topic: Poem/ Rap (Unfinished)
Posted By: Fugitive
Subject: Poem/ Rap (Unfinished)
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 12:57pm
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Nines on the street
Hearts stop before they hit the street
People run in fear as it becomes clear
NO ONE WILL BE SPARED
Mad man on the run
Blasting people just for fun//
As a call to the swat to take some action ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 1:07pm
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Hmm, your rhyming and syllables seem very random. I'd fix that. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 1:56pm
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Originally posted by Larwick
Hmm, your rhyming and syllables seem very random. I'd fix that. Your the first one to say that about it... ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 2:10pm
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Originally posted by Fugitive
Originally posted by Larwick
Hmm, your rhyming and syllables seem very random. I'd fix that. Your the first one to say that about it... Interesting. Well, let me elaborate. Your rhyming goes like this: 1 1 1 1 X X X 2 2 2 X X Good luck. ------------- http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 3:33pm
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Originally posted by Larwick
Originally posted by Fugitive
Originally posted by Larwick
Hmm, your rhyming and syllables seem very random. I'd fix that. Your the first one to say that about it... Interesting. Well, let me elaborate. Your rhyming goes like this: 1 1 1 1 X X X 2 2 2 X X Good luck. It's my first poem/ rap so if anyone can make it better or add to it that would be great... ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 07 May 2006 at 4:55pm
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I'd try rapping along to beats, if you haven't done this. Just get some rap instrumentals of songs and start there. The music helps timing.
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 9:14am
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Originally posted by Aleiav
I'd try rapping along to beats, if you haven't done this. Just get some rap instrumentals of songs and start there. The music helps timing. Right! I'll try that....
Could anyone try adding some more to it ? The subject is Grand Theft Auto ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 9:49am
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Originally posted by Fugitive The subject is Grand Theft Auto  Nines on the street - Purple Nines... GTA3? ------------- |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 5:33pm
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Originally posted by Skull
Originally posted by Fugitive The subject is Grand Theft Auto  Nines on the street - Purple Nines... GTA3? or Nines as in 9mm Handgun ... ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 5:45pm
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Fugitive, how do your posts make me click them multiple times to get the new posts icon to stay gone? Do you delete and repost? ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 6:01pm
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Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom
Fugitive, how do your posts make me click them multiple times to get the new posts icon to stay gone? Do you delete and repost? Yeah! It's better then double posting... Sorry ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 6:12pm
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Oh! Well, I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't; we comment in time. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 6:24pm
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Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom
we comment in time. and space! ------------- |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 6:28pm
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Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom
Oh! Well, I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't; we comment in time. It will never happen again...
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 7:26pm
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Originally posted by Fugitive Right! I'll try that....
Could anyone try adding some more to it ? The subject is Grand Theft Auto If we added more to it, it wouldn't be your rap, now would it? You should do it on your own. ------------- |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 08 May 2006 at 9:10pm
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Leave the police alone they are good folk. ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/"> 
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 2:05am
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Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw
Leave the police alone they are good folk. I think the police do a great job.
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Posted By: Brian the Great
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 4:32am
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Originally posted by pixelblink
Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom
we comment in time. and space! For that is the defenition of our commentinuum! ------------- http://www.twoschizos.com"> 
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 5:04am
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Originally posted by Aleiav
Originally posted by Fugitive Right! I'll try that....
Could anyone try adding some more to it ? The subject is Grand Theft Auto If we added more to it, it wouldn't be your rap, now would it? You should do it on your own. It could be a Collab with some pixel art stills to go with it... ------------- Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360 |