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Couldn’t think of an eye-catching title

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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: Couldn’t think of an eye-catching title
Posted By: cure
Subject: Couldn’t think of an eye-catching title
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 8:04pm

 

 

and in case the image won't show THIS time: http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j126/fasdpnog/aaaaaha.gif - http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j126/fasdpnog/aaaaaha.gif

  Please feel free to point out all faults.  Advice is extremely welcome.  It (obviously) isn't finished (the hair in particular.)  This was more an experiment with colors than anything, so feel free to tell me how I'm f*cking it up.  What I need more than anything is the advice of more talented pixelers.

 




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Posted By: Psychotic_Carp
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 8:07pm
How about RED X



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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 8:10pm

You're f**king up with the image postingness.

Either that, or I think you're stealing that red X from somewhere. I recognise it... can't 'member where from, though.



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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 8:22pm

Not exactly sure what you mean, Saboteur.  This "postingness" you speak of... can you translate it into a real word?

Three minutes later: Nevermind, its late here.  I reuploaded it from a different site, so maybe it'll work now.



Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 9:39pm
WOW. This is very nice I like it. Great emotion. The hair is a bit flat yet. He looks Roman for some reason.

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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 09 May 2006 at 11:22pm
English is overrated :P
And wow, that's impressive. The only crit I've got to throw at you is that his mouth doesn't seem as well defined as it could be... or somethin' like that.

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Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 10 May 2006 at 4:25am
Looking good. I don't understand the lighting on the nose though (the upper one between the eyes). It kind of makes it look like there is a huge bump there, so maybe the light should be distributed more equally along the full side of the nose.

But then again, I'm not sure, because...
What I need more than anything is the advice of more talented pixelers.

...I wouldn't put myself into that set.



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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 10 May 2006 at 1:36pm

 

Pixel_Outlaw:  There is still much to be done with the hair, and I'm not yet sure  how I'm going to go about it.

Saboteur: I think I see what you mean.  I may define the lower lip more.

Dennis Busch:  There is, in fact, a huge bump, but I may downplay it a bit more.

edit:  <-updated and submitted.




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