My first try at pixel art
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 24 February 2026 at 3:49pm
Topic: My first try at pixel art
Posted By: Setmin
Subject: My first try at pixel art
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 3:12am
 Update:  Last Update:  It's a whale thing I guess. C&C Please. |
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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 3:50am
I think it looks great for a first try. The shape is unusual, but I thikn that's the effect you want.. Very nice 
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 4:33am
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First try? That's pretty awesome. You've got the AA pretty much in the bag, but i dont understand why the back of him is AAd with a lighter colour... Nice character design anyway, reminded me of Krysis' killer whale. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Setmin
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 2:30pm
| Thank you guys. I didn't think it was very good for a first. Any crits on stuff to change? |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 2:36pm
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I'd get rid of the thin highlight on his back and just AA it normally. Also, you might want to make him more rounded, but it looks ok as it is. I think the black colour in the eye is wasted, i'd replace that with the darkest blue. Also, i'd make the white of the eye slightly larger with the lightest blue, and perhaps only use one pixel of white. Those are all the crits i have. ------------- http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Setmin
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 7:31pm
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Originally posted by Larwick I'd get rid of the thin highlight on his back and just AA it normally. Also, you might want to make him more rounded, but it looks ok as it is. I think the black colour in the eye is wasted, i'd replace that with the darkest blue. Also, i'd make the white of the eye slightly larger with the lightest blue, and perhaps only use one pixel of white. Those are all the crits i have. Ok, I updated and tried to fix what you said. I think it looks better. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 9:00pm
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Setmin, there is nothing to crit here, its fantastic
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 14 May 2006 at 11:25pm
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I think it's cool, ESPECIALLY for your first try. Excellent work. Maybe make a ocean scene/mockup? ------------- |
Posted By: Setmin
Date Posted: 15 May 2006 at 4:26pm
| Ok, I added one last update and if nobody has any crits I guess it's done. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 15 May 2006 at 4:35pm
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What's the green tone for? ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: Setmin
Date Posted: 15 May 2006 at 4:51pm
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Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom What's the green tone for? Supposed to be AA for the mini sub but it doesn't work to well. |