New sprites
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 22 April 2026 at 7:03pm
Topic: New sprites
Posted By: Hawkevil
Subject: New sprites
Date Posted: 22 May 2006 at 3:49pm
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Here are my second and third tries at pixelart.
Please tell me what could be better about these and maybe I will get round to fixing them. At the moment I'm kind of just moving on to new pictures and trying out new things. Any criticism will be appreciated |
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Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 23 May 2006 at 4:59am
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Not bad for a second and third piece... but: The propulsion flame is coming seemingly out of nowhere from below the feet. The feet themselves look out of perspective and too much 2D and with the flame below them, their lighting is illogical. The first figure looks crowded with details, so getting rid of some of the interior outlines could help. The arm or the end of the arm (hand?, sting?) is not really identifyable as anything and the small patch of detached pixels in front of it look like they were not intended to be there. The second figure could benefit from some aa. ------------- http://www.dennisbusch.de/index.php - 0xDB | https://twitter.com/dennisbusch_de - twitter |