Girl in Water
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=2336
Printed Date: 24 February 2026 at 3:49pm
Topic: Girl in Water
Posted By: halfDemon
Subject: Girl in Water
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 9:13pm
|
I need some help making the outlines less jagged on this one:
And any other C&C would be appreciated. ------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |
>>
>>
Replies:
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:33pm
|
I'd work on the anatomy first. The breasts are much too high. The arms seem a little short and very rigid. I'd also suggest using more contrast on the colors used on the skin. And since shes clothed and in water, maybe a little wet effect using the darker red up to maybe knee-level. The dithering also looks out of place as it is only used on the character and even then it hasn't touched the hair. |
Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 08 June 2006 at 10:58pm
|
Is this any better?
I know I still have a long way to go. Also, I'm at a loss for shading the area above the breasts. Help and C&C would be appreceated. ------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 09 June 2006 at 12:08pm
| I would personally lower the wetness a little bit. I'm not sure if you would really want to dither a piece this size, but at least the dithering is now consistent. The arms, however, remain stiff; and it'd be nice to see a little more detail on her stomach. The breasts look better, but could still use a little work. I wouldn't give her such defined cleavage. |
Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 10 June 2006 at 3:31pm
|
What do you mean by "lower the wetness"? You mean, lower the value? ------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 10 June 2006 at 3:38pm
|
I believe he means how the wetness of her trousers goes so high. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
|
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 10 June 2006 at 3:42pm
|
Thanks Larwick. Yea, like how far up on her dress is wet, lower how high the water wet her dress a little bit. |
Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 12 June 2006 at 1:16pm
|
Any better?
Also, should I keep the change in the lips or no? ------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |
Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 14 June 2006 at 12:21pm
|
Sorry for the double post, but I would love some help. ------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |
Posted By: Nitram
Date Posted: 14 June 2006 at 1:11pm
| I say lower the wetness still and add a darker yellow colorr plus a darker skin color, also add more contrast on the skin. |