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Girl in Water

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 24 February 2026 at 3:49pm


Topic: Girl in Water
Posted By: halfDemon
Subject: Girl in Water
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 9:13pm

I need some help making the outlines less jagged on this one:

>>>>Girl in Water

And any other C&C would be appreciated.



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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:33pm

 

I'd work on the anatomy first.  The breasts are much too high.  The arms seem a little short and very rigid.  I'd also suggest using more contrast on the colors used on the skin.  And since shes clothed and in water, maybe a little wet effect using the darker red up to maybe knee-level.  The dithering also looks out of place as it is only used on the character and even then it hasn't touched the hair.



Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 08 June 2006 at 10:58pm

Is this any better?

Girl in Water

I know I still have a long way to go. Also, I'm at a loss for shading the area above the breasts. Help and C&C would be appreceated.



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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 09 June 2006 at 12:08pm
I would personally lower the wetness a little bit.  I'm not sure if you would really want to dither a piece this size, but at least the dithering is now consistent.  The arms, however, remain stiff; and it'd be nice to see a little more detail on her stomach.  The breasts look better, but could still use a little work.  I wouldn't give her such defined cleavage.


Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 10 June 2006 at 3:31pm
What do you mean by "lower the wetness"? You mean, lower the value?

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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 10 June 2006 at 3:38pm
I believe he means how the wetness of her trousers goes so high.

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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 10 June 2006 at 3:42pm

Thanks Larwick.  Yea, like how far up on her dress is wet, lower how high the water wet her dress a little bit. 



Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 12 June 2006 at 1:16pm

Any better?

Also, should I keep the change in the lips or no?



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Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 14 June 2006 at 12:21pm
Sorry for the double post, but I would love some help.

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Posted By: Nitram
Date Posted: 14 June 2006 at 1:11pm
I say lower the wetness still and add a darker yellow colorr plus a darker skin color, also add more contrast on the skin.



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