Bread Roll
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 22 February 2026 at 5:38pm
Topic: Bread Roll
Posted By: Zizka
Subject: Bread Roll
Date Posted: 19 November 2015 at 1:00pm
Could you criticize the living sh*t out of this piece please?
Thanks please. |
Replies:
Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 19 November 2015 at 1:34pm
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I don't know what I'm looking at, but it's cute and the animation's very smooth. The number of times it spins is too much for the distance it moves. I don't like how square the eyes are compared to how round everything else is. If your palette has the room, adding another colour to smooth out the corners would help, I think. |
Posted By: Lindion45
Date Posted: 20 November 2015 at 5:46am
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It's awesome!
But I don't like how the whites of his eyes just completely disappear, but that seems to be a recurring theme in your work, so I doubt you'll be changing it xD |
Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 20 November 2015 at 8:27am
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@eishiya: It's a slice of bread, silly :D. Ok for the eyes and the rolling motion, easy to fix.
@Lindion45: Yah! Way too late to change that :D. |
Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 20 November 2015 at 8:39am
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It's a very long slice of bread xP Must've been a very tall loaf. |
Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 20 November 2015 at 8:48am
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All bread is born equal, some bread is just longer than others.
-Zizka, 2015 |
Posted By: drain
Date Posted: 28 November 2015 at 8:19pm
| I'm not keen into animating, but to me it looks as if it turns slightly to the left when it rolls, as it just turns into a circle, and for the distance he covers, the amount of rolls seem to be too much. |
Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 28 December 2015 at 5:51am
Final version folks:
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Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 28 December 2015 at 8:32am
| I know you said "final", but I'm curious: maybe the eye motion might read fine without suddenly adding white parts to the eyes? I don't think you need the white since your goal is just to show the eyes spinning. The contrast between the bread and white is low enough that it doesn't make a big functional difference, and just adds a weird detail. |
Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 29 December 2015 at 8:29am
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Yup! Good point. The reason why I added it is because it's part of the ''style'' of the whole game, where you go from white to no white etc...
I forgot to add you in the credit in the gallery. Sorry about that! Will do so right away! |
Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 29 December 2015 at 9:37am
| Credit? In what gallery? I didn't do anything! |