Would love some critique
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Printed Date: 16 December 2025 at 5:54pm
Topic: Would love some critique
Posted By: jimdraws
Subject: Would love some critique
Date Posted: 19 March 2016 at 6:38pm
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Hey, Currently drawing some yellow stone blocks for pushing around in a game, I'm going for an Egyptian pyramid feel. I am quite happy with the current look but definitely feel they could be improved. Link to art: http://imgur.com/xv9HLE1 Any tips or critique very welcome Thanks, Jim |
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Posted By: pizzalated
Date Posted: 19 March 2016 at 8:31pm
I think you should increase contrast and hue shifting. You should also keep a smaller number of colors in your palette, because it looks like you're blending colors without control. Like so:
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Posted By: jimdraws
Date Posted: 19 March 2016 at 9:14pm
| Thanks for the feedback, yours is much better. Really appreciate it ;) Will try and use your palette and re-upload it! |
Posted By: pizzalated
Date Posted: 20 March 2016 at 6:43am
| You can use my palette if you want, but you should practice and try doing it yourself. |