Help with Patapon Animation
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Topic: Help with Patapon Animation
Posted By: legendarySchoolboy
Subject: Help with Patapon Animation
Date Posted: 10 July 2017 at 2:38pm
I submitted an image that needs revision.
I changed the animation to be more interesting, but I still think it's too simple to be accepted. 
I would love some recommendations. |
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Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 10 July 2017 at 4:38pm
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The problem isn't that it's too simple. Plenty of simple pieces get submitted. The problem is probably that the background looks jagged and unpolished, and that your piece is pre-zoomed, and unevenly at that. Submit at 1x unless you have some reason not to - the site has a zoom feature, so people can zoom in if they want. As for the jagged lines, here's an edit that uses regular lines to show you what I mean:  If I kept all the line segments the same width in each line, this gives them a cleaner look. I also tried to make them look like they're radiating from the character. I also made the character a little rounder because their circle shaped looked jagged/uneven to me, but I might've misinterpreted your intended design. Feel free to ignore that. |