Beginner Looking for some critique
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Topic: Beginner Looking for some critique
Posted By: Roots2D
Subject: Beginner Looking for some critique
Date Posted: 04 May 2019 at 11:17am
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Hi! I've done some drawing in the past but just getting back into it now and wanting to dive into pixel-art. Interested in some feedback on some small pieces.
The anvil took me a quite a few hours as I sketched it first but then took the time to work on the curved lines. thanks! 
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Posted By: -
Date Posted: 05 May 2019 at 3:58am
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The anvil: I'm by no means an expert, but I would add a little more contrast and some more dirt, along with reflective patches (the hammering would probably add scuffs). Also, maybe the pespective looks a tad wonky? The top-most region shouldn't be so high...or is it just me? Other that than, it actually looks quite good! The other thing (I don't know it's english name - can only think of a "tina" - portuguese name): Looks quite good, but way too regular? Seems a lot like you began with a 2-point-perspective idea and changed your mind? Other than this minor point, I would say it's quite good as well! How many colours are you using on those?
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