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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 13 August 2022 at 2:24pm


Topic: Revise Revise Revise
Posted By: Gyeff
Subject: Revise Revise Revise
Date Posted: 10 May 2022 at 9:16am
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I'm stuck in a loop of revising my base sprites.

The problem is that at any moment they look good, but every time I look back at pre-revision works (that looked good to me at the time) they look horrendous to me and I don't know why I thought they were any good.

I'm mainly looking for critiques about consistency (especially height/mass) and colors and if certain shapes look off.



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Posted By: Gyeff
Date Posted: 16 May 2022 at 2:59pm
Made a lot of revisions in order to try to improve mass consistency.

Do the feet look too big? I'm thinking about making them smaller. What do you think?




Posted By: Gyeff
Date Posted: 18 May 2022 at 11:08pm
First time trying portrait




Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 05 June 2022 at 5:48am
I'd say my issue is that the eye in the portrait is of a different style than the character. I think Final Fantasy Tactics managed to transition from one version to another well.


Posted By: Limes
Date Posted: 12 July 2022 at 6:50pm
Originally posted by Zizka

I'd say my issue is that the eye in the portrait is of a different style than the character. I think Final Fantasy Tactics managed to transition from one version to another well.




Edit with Zizka's point.

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Posted By: Greycloak
Date Posted: 21 July 2022 at 7:19pm
I think the rounded feet are a bit cuter, but the sharper feet are more "realistic". Either way I think it is a small detail though. The base sprites already look quite good.

The portrait feels like it could use some more work though. Since you seem to be going for a FFT style I'd probably study how they designed their portraits.



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