Dragons
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 10 April 2026 at 2:28am
Topic: Dragons
Posted By: Macks
Subject: Dragons
Date Posted: 18 August 2006 at 9:01am
I've started on a new Dragon. I figured I'd get some C&C on the lines before I go any further. |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 18 August 2006 at 10:34am
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Seems like your proportions are a bit off. The balance between the head
and the rear feet are very disproportionate. The snout also seems a bit
too rounded for the general pointiness of everything else. The wing's
shape is not working for me. While you may be able to add depth and
dimension in coloring it. The outline simply has no sense of movement
or and organic feel to it. One last thing is the tip of the tail.
resting on its side as it is does not add to the overall composition.
Perhaps if it goes the other way and even points up a bit it will add
some dynamism to the left side of the picture. KUTGW.
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Posted By: Morgan
Date Posted: 21 August 2006 at 2:13pm
| I would consider doing some quick pencil sketches -- like a dozen or so -- to try out more dynamic poses. You'll learn a lot more for the time spent than trying to do the same thing on-screen. |