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Shio The Genin

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 24 February 2026 at 3:49pm


Topic: Shio The Genin
Posted By: Craddik
Subject: Shio The Genin
Date Posted: 12 September 2006 at 6:00pm

Original Lines by teej (yes i have permission to use them), i'm using it for shading practice.




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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 12 September 2006 at 6:36pm
I wouldn't dither the hair - it's just not the right texture for it.
 
That's all i have right now, there's not much shading there to cc..


Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 12 September 2006 at 7:55pm
I wouldn't dither the hair or the metal bands.

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Posted By: Craddik
Date Posted: 13 September 2006 at 4:23am
yeah, i'll fix those things when i post the next update.


Posted By: Draco9898
Date Posted: 13 September 2006 at 6:10am
The bands covering up his hair and the hair still sticking out looks really weird.

I do however like all the angles and the anatomy


Posted By: Craddik
Date Posted: 13 September 2006 at 12:27pm
not my lines


Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 13 September 2006 at 2:08pm
Craddik, even if they arn't your lines, there's no harm in correcting them, or taking in people's advice so you can correct them by colouring. For instance, you could create the image of depth on the fringe behind the headbands so that it's more obvious that hair is coming from the other side of his head, rather than sticking out of his forehead.

Good luck.

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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 13 September 2006 at 2:14pm
And make sure to give credit where credit is due.

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Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 13 September 2006 at 3:47pm
He has given credit to teej.

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Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.


Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 13 September 2006 at 3:52pm
I realized that just now. :'[

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