Cigar Guy
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 13 June 2026 at 2:29pm
Topic: Cigar Guy
Posted By: VictorR
Subject: Cigar Guy
Date Posted: 16 September 2006 at 8:58pm
Got the colors from one of indigos old edits. Just had to try them. CnC welcome, its still a very very WIP.
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 1:29am
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did you make the lines yourself too? if so, the anatomy is quite the improvement over the pink ryu
however it is very pillowshaded, and segmented, musclewise
the head could be a tad bigger too ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 2:27am
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You're definitly improving. I like the sort of dirty skin coloured palette.. goes well with the idea of a smoker.. slightly dark and mysterious. ------------- |
Posted By: VictorR
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 12:00pm
| Thanks! and i was looking back at my old Syko guy and im glad to say i am improving thanks to you guys!! |
Posted By: Microradiation
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 12:28pm
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Hi Vic,
Besides the aforementioned pillowshading, the arms are a bit strange. The right bicep at that semi-relaxed position should stretch fairly close to the joint, and should feel more "attached" to the arm. Sorry for the non-technical aspects of that speech ^_^. Muscle definition is good, but try not to overdo it. Use less contrast where the volumetrics suggest more shallow indentations, such as the abs, where that darkest color should be used sparingly, or not at all. Perhaps, when you finish the other arm, do it in a darker shade, so it'd suggests that it's farther back into the background. Or something to that effect. Again, somewhat non-technical. I'm not an anatomy person. :) I must say I like the pants. The folds are very natural, and... yeah. Use more contrast and polish it a bit more, and it'd be great. Yeah. Sorry I'm not exactly familiar with you, so I don't exactly know the extent of your progression, but I do wish you luck in your future pixel endeavors. ------------- Formerly CrazyAznGamer. |
Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 12:31pm
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Just noticed.. How wide is that guy's right wrist?
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Posted By: VictorR
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 6:53pm
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i meant it to be so u could see a bit of his thumb..its not a huge wrist if you look at it closeley and micro, thanks!! |