Mockup of platformer
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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: Mockup of platformer
Posted By: K_B
Subject: Mockup of platformer
Date Posted: 10 December 2006 at 4:39am
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My last project didnīt turn out well (yes, i hate it now :)).
I decided to do a little mockup for a platformer. C&C welcome, mostly the sprite i guess :D. No shading done yet. 
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 10 December 2006 at 2:07pm
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There's really ont much to crit until you start shading, but right off the bat, I notice that you have really dark outlines in some places and black ones in others. I suggest giving the foreground stuff such as enemies and the character outlines or extra contrast and placing less emphasis on the other areas, such as tiles. Also, decrease the saturation of your art. Right now it looks like crazy neon all over. Tone the colors down and give the lines some more organic forms to make things look mpore natural. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
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