Ratz (W.I.P)
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 11 October 2022 at 3:30pm
Topic: Ratz (W.I.P)
Posted By: ZmanZ
Subject: Ratz (W.I.P)
Date Posted: 18 January 2007 at 4:51pm
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Name: "Ratz" Colors: 26 Time: 1hr 30min  Name: "Princess" Colors: 30 Time 30 min.  Please help me improve. -Zack ------------- Get http://www.eecs.wsu.edu/paint.net/ - Paint.NET |
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Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 18 January 2007 at 9:25pm
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Hello there. You seem to have a habit of gradient-shading, which is
especially prominant in the first image, the second one is a bit
better, but still fraught with it; you need to pay more attention to
the 3D form of the things you are shading. Here's a bit of a quick edit to give you an idea of the planes:  |
Posted By: ZmanZ
Date Posted: 19 January 2007 at 11:46am
 Is that any better? ------------- Get http://www.eecs.wsu.edu/paint.net/ - Paint.NET |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 21 January 2007 at 12:33pm
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He has no feet.. and I dunno, it still seems like you just shaded everything like cylinders. The clothes are never this stiff and solid looking, add some folds, wrinkles. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 21 January 2007 at 1:19pm
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I think the princess could use some added contrast and she has rather boring lines. They're boring because you have two vertical lines that persist throuth the sprite. Try adding some puff to the skirt and bend to the arms to fix that problem.
You also have some unneeded colors. There's a grey for the eyebrows that's not needed and the blue of the eyes isn't either; you can't really make it out if you're not specifically trying to tell what color the eyes are. Try a green instead, one from the dress. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |