W.I.P MOZ Graffiti Can #2 - Finished
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Printed Date: 27 February 2026 at 12:49pm
Topic: W.I.P MOZ Graffiti Can #2 - Finished
Posted By: Varock Shade
Subject: W.I.P MOZ Graffiti Can #2 - Finished
Date Posted: 20 January 2007 at 6:36am
 FInished Version...  Edit 4 - More "Living" Eyes?+Background colours edited (To me, this could be the version ill be sending for approval)...   Edit 3 - Colour/Contrast Edit+Silver Edges on the mouth  Edit 2 - Continued Shading+Backside of mouth added+Bg Added  Edit 1 - Continued shading+Edited lower Rim  This pixel is because i had an idea for another cartoony graffiti can... But this time i decided to go for a different way of shading, and also this wont be for a sticker... I want to know what you think of it, and how the shading looks (i know it looks grainy, but i want it kinda grainy...  Ref picture of the can: http://www.graffitishop.cz/data/big/m_black_terror.jpg (Im not gonna put the letters in i think, ill decide that later, i wanna keep it simple)... ------------- http://www.mega.freeforums.org/ < PJ Member Dran's Multimedia and RP Forum |
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 20 January 2007 at 5:31pm
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lower rim is screwed up ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 20 January 2007 at 5:40pm
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the shape looks a little awkward. I like your other one which was like ( much more than > now. If that makes sense. Maybe if you make the thingie at the top point in the same direction as the top part of the can it'll look better and yeah, like snader said, why is there a random dip in the lower rip? last can I saw it was even.
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Posted By: Varock Shade
Date Posted: 26 January 2007 at 4:58am
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After some time, edit 1... I edited the lower rim, im not gonna edit the cap, cause i think it looks good this way (else the upper part of the can will look too long and hanging too much forward)... Also, i continued the shading, which i like so far. The only problem that ims till facing is that my right mouse button is still not working and i still didnt buy a new one (so edit 2 will take some time)...  ------------- http://www.mega.freeforums.org/ < PJ Member Dran's Multimedia and RP Forum |
Posted By: Bifur
Date Posted: 26 January 2007 at 6:48am
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back part of the mouth seems ripped, dont be lazy draw it
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Posted By: Varock Shade
Date Posted: 26 January 2007 at 7:32am
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you mean there seems to be no right side of the mouth...? yeah, youre right about that, but on my drawing for this pixel it neither had it, and i think it will look better witout, but i can make an edit of it anyway... Edit 2 - I continued the shading, added a backside of the mouth and made a simple Bg... Probly the Bg is gonna get some edits, but this idea popped up in my mind... ------------- http://www.mega.freeforums.org/ < PJ Member Dran's Multimedia and RP Forum |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 26 January 2007 at 12:18pm
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what is he supposed to be doing? he seems to be doubling over in pain.
And add some life to the eyes
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Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 26 January 2007 at 12:22pm
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The texture looks like brushed aluminum...... ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/"> 
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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 26 January 2007 at 1:26pm
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Looks to me as if he's coughing really heavily.
You could use to make the can's cross-section (the 'lips') the same silver as the other unpainted part and maybe give the darkish part a more black and less gunmetal color; cans are generally not painted dark grey like that. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
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Posted By: Varock Shade
Date Posted: 27 January 2007 at 12:26am
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Originally posted by leel what is he supposed to be doing? he seems to be doubling over in pain. And add some life to the eyes About the first thing... I think it doesn't look like he's having pain... anyway, youre right about the eyes, They look bad at the moment... Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw The texture looks like brushed aluminum...... Is that be a positive or a negative thing to you...? Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom Looks to me as if he's coughing really heavily. You could use to make the can's cross-section (the 'lips') the same silver as the other unpainted part and maybe give the darkish part a more black and less gunmetal color; cans are generally not painted dark grey like that. I am gonna change colours... The silver has a nice contrast i think, it only needs a little edit... The red certainly needs more contrast, probably the greys too, and if I edit the grey, i probably also need to edit the cyan-like colour... And about the lips, ill make an edit of that and see what it looks like... And coughing really heavily... I dont think it looks like that but well, Bg is still at an early stage... Edit 3: On the left the silver edges at the mouth, on the right side the colour/contrast edit. Finished version... ------------- http://www.mega.freeforums.org/ < PJ Member Dran's Multimedia and RP Forum |