Dragonling
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 06 April 2026 at 6:13am
Topic: Dragonling
Posted By: omegasonic
Subject: Dragonling
Date Posted: 02 February 2007 at 10:40am
I tried submitting this but it says it needs revision, so, anyone point out the revision i need to do? |
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Posted By: MadMage
Date Posted: 02 February 2007 at 11:03am
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Hm... Sometimes I also find it difficult to point out the reasons for "not accepted artwork".
IŽd say your colours are ok, but perspective is bizarre. The eyes position makes this dragon look like a flatfish. Hmmmm.... Yeh! IŽd go for perspective! work on that!  ------------- This is not a signature. |
Posted By: Opacus
Date Posted: 02 February 2007 at 11:57am
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Needs revision either means they think you stole something, is not transparent for no reason. OR, as in this case, is of too low quality. Before submitting pieces it is important you post it here, or at other pixel forums to get critique.  What did I change=A few small things, but most important of all, your colours. Your colours were so oversatured they looked like Las Vegas... ------------- http://www.last.fm/user/Shadowwwolf/?chartstyle=Bones"> 
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Posted By: omegasonic
Date Posted: 02 February 2007 at 12:34pm
I had a go, but im not too good at changing the saturation @_@ Decreased everything by 90. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 02 February 2007 at 7:32pm
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I like your dragon and don't find this too objectionable. As mentioned the sense of depth is weak. Your dithering seems good but the illusion of depth is lacking. Keep trying, k.
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