mobile snow... why not
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 01 August 2026 at 3:34am
Topic: mobile snow... why not
Posted By: Artisan
Subject: mobile snow... why not
Date Posted: 08 February 2007 at 11:05am
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Hey pixeljointians, me here signing in.
Recently.. being sometime today, i started on the fourth of my mobile games and have decided to put my work on this game up for crits.. as i dont think my last graphics were anywhere as good as they could be. anyways in the game you are a kid who goes around dodgeing snowballs throwing snowballs diveing through caves leaping across ice burgs and all to get home in time for tea :D... because why not here is what i have made so far, 
the reason i have posted the loading screen is because it should give you some idea of the style i want, it shows you the screen size i am makeing the game for, it has the main player sprite in it. Mainly i want crits on the main player sprite but PLEASE feel free to crit anything. UPDATE... i have updated the main charicter (thanks souly :) ) also there is the start to the running animation 
UPDATE...thanks MOD, cool beans.. any better? i shaded the running now and moved arms like you sugested... also i made him bob a bit and bought the back arm faward more. 
crits? p.s, cool beans ------------- I like shiny things, i do indeed. |
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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 08 February 2007 at 11:44am
Alright did an edit on your character. ------------- 
I am the jesus of PJ. |
Posted By: Artisan
Date Posted: 08 February 2007 at 2:02pm
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UPDATE... i have updated the main charicter (thanks souly :) ) also there is the start to the running animation
------------- I like shiny things, i do indeed. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 08 February 2007 at 5:05pm
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The arm in the back looks like it's attached too far back. Try making it show in more frames and more in the frames it's in. I don't have any other crits at this point, good luck with the rest of the game! ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: Artisan
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 12:59pm
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<OLD> thanks MOD, cool beans.. any better? i shaded the running now and moved arms like you sugested... also i made him bob a bit and bought the back arm faward more.
crits? ANOTHER EDIT!!! 
your thoughts? </OLD> Anyways superupdateeritus... 
i beleive the kind fellas over at pixelation have helped me much improve that run cycle.... but im a-in need of help inspiration or differnt ideas to my tiles.... i HATE what i have so far so all help on them is more than apreciated! thanks. me ------------- I like shiny things, i do indeed. |