Pizza Box
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 15 June 2026 at 12:26pm
Topic: Pizza Box
Posted By: Hapiel
Subject: Pizza Box
Date Posted: 10 February 2007 at 2:00am
 Hello guys! Im not doing much flat pixels, I like to work isometric, cos its easyer :p However I made this pizza box, and it wasnt accepted becouse it does not meet the quality standards.. Can anyone help me and say what to inprove? Thnx, Lollige |
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 10 February 2007 at 5:35am
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i think the pizza itself looks a bit messy, and the perspective is off (it should be twice as wide as high as well)
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Posted By: Setzer
Date Posted: 10 February 2007 at 11:13am
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the pizza seems really flat and lacks form, compared to the harsh black outlines, its very hard to tell there is a round pizza in there. You might want to darken the edges some.
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Posted By: onyx
Date Posted: 18 May 2007 at 9:41pm
| the pizza is not very visible, maybe you need to make it bigger to add detail |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 18 May 2007 at 10:28pm
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Originally posted by onyx the pizza is not very visible, maybe you need to make it bigger to add detail y did u bump it? However its accepted yet, reduced the colors... |