Revision needed on?
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Topic: Revision needed on?
Posted By: Christopher
Subject: Revision needed on?
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 1:57pm
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What do i need to redo on this? http://pixeljoint.com/files/icons/fighter.png - http://pixeljoint.com/files/icons/fighter.png
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:06pm
There's a lot of things that you could do to improve this. Anatomy is the main issue - his pose looks awkward, the arms are different lengths, the knee on his right leg is too high, etc.
Another issue is the lightsource - the shading is inconsistent on the legs, and the skin has no shading at all. The hair could also use some work.
Overall, this isn't too aesthetically pleasing, I'm not a super spriter, so I strongly advise that you closely study some of the sprites in the gallery and try to figure out what it is about them that makes them effective.
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Posted By: Christopher
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:15pm
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I agree with the shading. Not with the akward pose thing because its an actual martial arts pose.
Thanks for the opinion, ill try to touch it up a little. |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:18pm
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So you believe you've absolutely perfectly rendered the pose?
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Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 7:30pm
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YOu need to learn how to shade, go study some Capcom or SNK fighting game art. ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/"> 
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 7:42pm
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i would like to know what martial arts style that comes from... i have studied many styles of the martial arts and have never seen a pose like that before
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