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Revision needed on?

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 11 October 2022 at 3:48pm


Topic: Revision needed on?
Posted By: Christopher
Subject: Revision needed on?
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 1:57pm

What do i need to redo on this?

http://pixeljoint.com/files/icons/fighter.png - http://pixeljoint.com/files/icons/fighter.png



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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:06pm
 
There's a lot of things that you could do to improve this.  Anatomy is the main issue - his pose looks awkward, the arms are different lengths, the knee on his right leg is too high, etc.
 
Another issue is the lightsource - the shading is inconsistent on the legs, and the skin has no shading at all.  The hair could also use some work.
 
Overall, this isn't too aesthetically pleasing, I'm not a super spriter, so I strongly advise that you closely study some of the sprites in the gallery and try to figure out what it is about them that makes them effective. 
 
Good luck


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Posted By: Christopher
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:15pm
I agree with the shading. Not with the akward pose thing because its an actual martial arts pose.

Thanks for the opinion, ill try to touch it up a little.


Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:18pm
So you believe you've absolutely perfectly rendered the pose?
 
 
Ok.


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Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 7:30pm
YOu need to learn how to shade, go study some Capcom or SNK fighting game art.

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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 11 February 2007 at 7:42pm
i would like to know what martial arts style that comes from...  i have studied many styles of the martial arts and have never seen a pose like that before

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