Fighter Character
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 28 October 2025 at 9:06am
Topic: Fighter Character
Posted By: Christopher
Subject: Fighter Character
Date Posted: 17 March 2007 at 8:02pm
 The palette basicly sucks, i've always been bad at that. Just anything to change is helpful, it has a ways to go till its done. EDIT- Just wanted to see how it lookw ith outline, so.  Final?  |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 18 March 2007 at 6:17am
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Great pose. I say shade using dramatic lighting and keep strong outlines to define the areas, maybe some simplified selout. Colors are workable.
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Posted By: Serendor
Date Posted: 18 March 2007 at 3:50pm
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Yes, some shadows on and it would be great the foot in the back seems to be a little tiny compared to the rest of the guy.... |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 18 March 2007 at 6:05pm
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just up the contrast, the colors are fine for the most part. The problem is that they all look the same.
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Posted By: Christopher
Date Posted: 18 March 2007 at 7:37pm
Finished version, unless anyone says different.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 18 March 2007 at 11:47pm
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Try upping the contrast a bit. The colors don't seem to different from eachother. ------------- |
Posted By: Christopher
Date Posted: 19 March 2007 at 12:41pm
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"Didnt gain the score needed to get into the gallery"
So...About that......... I tried to up the contrast a little bit from the beginning one.
So whats the major thing its not getting approved for? |
Posted By: Forge
Date Posted: 19 March 2007 at 1:06pm
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For me, I think the weakest part of this piece is the head and face.
First, I think the head could be larger and wider. It looks as though his and neck are 1 cylinder.
Making the head and face wider will give you more room to detail it.
Otherwise, I think the pose is great and your proportions seem good.
Maybe some more contrast and shading.
Good job.
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 19 March 2007 at 3:00pm
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many things bother me about this. first the face... forge explains that... the next is the shading... you have highlights where you should have shadows, mainly on the arms at the sleeve ------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Christopher
Date Posted: 19 March 2007 at 7:55pm
| Alright, thanks ens ill try to touch it up some tommorow. |