[w.i.p.] ...space prison? [ANIMATED!!]
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: The Joint
Forum Discription: Post your WIPs, ideas and anything else to do with the massive isometric apartment project.
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=406
Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 5:19pm
Topic: [w.i.p.] ...space prison? [ANIMATED!!]
Posted By: kiwidesign
Subject: [w.i.p.] ...space prison? [ANIMATED!!]
Date Posted: 27 June 2005 at 3:03pm
another piece.... maybe my second entry for the joint ;)

how thread subject says, this is a sort of space prison...
later, I'll animate the piece... I think I'll do lasers flashing or appear/disappear 
how about? what can I change/better?
|
Replies:
Posted By: DrunkyDuck
Date Posted: 27 June 2005 at 3:36pm
Another awesome room.
Don't forget to add some laser fence generators in the lowest room corner.
Can't wait to see it done.
------------- Reaching out to embrace the random.
Reaching out to embrace whatever may come.
I embrace my desire
to swing on the spiral of our divinity
and still be a human.
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 27 June 2005 at 4:06pm
Originally posted by DrunkyDuck
Don't forget to add some laser fence generators in the lowest room corner.
uhm... if you are thinking about the laser fence on the glass cube... it is the reflex of the bigger one 
Originally posted by DrunkyDuck
Can't wait to see it done.
*Aw* ...here is 1.00am and tomorrow I have to wake up very early... I'll finish it tomorrow night 
...other suggestions?
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 27 June 2005 at 7:54pm
yap... I finally understand what didn't work!!
the laser fence-corner... has no solid corner! 
here three different solutions:
1. 2. 3.
I think 3rd is the best one... what about you?
|
Posted By: DrunkyDuck
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 4:34am
I'd go with nuber 1, but I'm sure some people would like 2 or 3 better, so choose what you think is the best.
------------- Reaching out to embrace the random.
Reaching out to embrace whatever may come.
I embrace my desire
to swing on the spiral of our divinity
and still be a human.
|
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 8:13am
I'd go with 1 or 2 personally.
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 3:07pm
thks, I think I'll continue with this...

something to fix before animate?
add something to the scene?
|
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 3:33pm
I think the laser field could use some highlights so they don't look so flat. Also, why have the dude inside a glass casing when the room itself is protected by a laser field? I think you should also add some furnishing of some sort > a cot, a toilet and sink. Take a look online at some prisons (both fictional and factual) and see what they have to offer for ideas.
-------------
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 5:48pm
okay, with order:
was in my plans to get the fence more really, but is the last thing i wanna do, after fixed bigger problems 
about furnitures I thinked the cell like a sort of "maximum security isolation cell" ... and in all the movies I seen (luckily I never seen a real one) isolation cell were empty rooms ;)
the glass cube is the "first cage", the real cell.... laser fence is a sort of security obstacle :)
|
Posted By: kankki
Date Posted: 29 June 2005 at 3:30am
This looks nice!
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 29 June 2005 at 9:48am
solved the corner problem....

uhmm... what can I add to the left part? http://cgi.ebay.it/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&category=17851&item=6542118721&rd=1http://cgi.ebay.it/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&category=17851&item=6542118721&rd=1 -
|
Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 29 June 2005 at 11:45pm
Think for another inscription for "ISO.CELL #1" now look very thin and high ...
... and agree with pixelblink for furnishing :)
================================
:) GDGB :)
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 30 June 2005 at 9:45am
added the loo and the alarm (if I'll decide to put it in final image, I think it will flash...), very little bit textured the walls and changed the inscription....

yap, also a bit lightened the fence 
|
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 30 June 2005 at 9:49am
Make sure your animation doesn't break past the top of the walls or it will not show up.
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 30 June 2005 at 9:49am
mmmmh... okay 
about the rest?
|
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:00am
i like this one!!
maybe you could get the lasers to animate a bit to show that they
are moving, like a spark now and again, or a pulsating wave through
the lasers,
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 8:44am
yep, I'm doing it in my free time
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 1:04pm
finally animated!!! 
finished this night, I'm really satisfied by the piece 

...I know it shouldn't break past the top of the walls, but if I submit it like now it's a problem, or simply the outside part will not show up?
C&C are welcome!!
|
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 3:44pm
It will show up fine, but the ceiling of the apartment will be covered up... just look at some of the existing submissions to see what i mean. Check/uncheck the "show exterior walls".
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 5:13pm
I know, I also had some tries to check how it will show, masking the room with the joint corridor walls....
btw clicking on it, it will be shown entirely right?
what about animation work? let's go, destroy me boys!! 
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 5:19pm
(sedge, you mean something like http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3230/spaceprisonmasked9nm.gif - this , right?)
|
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 05 July 2005 at 8:53pm
I think this is joint-ready dude. I like that you actually put the time and effort into getting feedback, updating, getting more feedback, updating again, getting even more feedback, and then producing the animation. There will always be things in everybody's work that I will think I would do differently. But that wouldn't make it your own original work. Kudos to you for a piece well done 
-------------
|
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 05 July 2005 at 10:49pm
Originally posted by kiwidesign
(sedge, you mean something like http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3230/spaceprisonmasked9nm.gif - this , right?)
That's exactly right.
Edit: Btw, thank you for taking the time to demonstrate that.
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 06 July 2005 at 1:59am
big thanks to everybody!! 
I did a few pixel art in the past, but never with this motivation.... pixel joint is a very nice project, and I hope to continue finding time for this!
now I'm doing 100x100 preview for the submission.... 
..and excuse me for my always be-in-hurry 
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 06 July 2005 at 4:47am
submitted!! if possible I'd like to see it into position 6
------------- "She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
|
Posted By: jujucece
Date Posted: 07 July 2005 at 1:19am
It's a very cool pixel art...
And the animation is nice too !
Congratulations !
------------- Jujucece
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 07 July 2005 at 3:26am
thanks ^^
------------- "She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
|
Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 07 July 2005 at 3:33am
Originally posted by kiwidesignsubmitted!! if possible I'd like to see it into position 6
ouch.... not possible?
------------- "She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
|
|