wolverine
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 June 2026 at 12:28am
Topic: wolverine
Posted By: theguy
Subject: wolverine
Date Posted: 26 May 2007 at 5:15pm
just to clarify this isnt a render It was hand pixelled
 this is going to be a sheet by the way an RPG sheet for my friends comic because he as a PS3 and marvel ultimate alliance and wanted to make a comic about it so he asked me if I would make the sprites for him!
any crits?
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 1:28am
| Crop the image, thats my suggestion... (oh and the shading on the face is pretty weird...) |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 5:57am
fixed it, plus I moved his shoe a bit two the right it looked like he was pretending to be a cowboy or something plus its going to be a sheet and I'm using GG so I can't crop it without having to constantly change the canvas size paste new images to crop
 anywho any more crits?
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 6:43am
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his knees look bent in the wrong way
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Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 6:44am
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good point I'll change that now
EDIT:
 any better?
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 10:31am
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why the hugeass canvas? ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 10:35am
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mostly because I'm using GG the other part is because I can't be bothered to copy and paste new image, lol |
Posted By: AdrianJensen
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 10:38am
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With the unbending of his knees, the feet look a little off, maybe they should face forward.
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Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 11:01am
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m'kay
EDIT:
done
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 6:31pm
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I dont see any difference in what you did, sorry. What I meant was the shading. If the knees are bent, they should get more light since they're coming towards you. All you have is a giant shadow which shows that they're not coming towards but away from the viewer.
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Posted By: AdrianJensen
Date Posted: 27 May 2007 at 9:00pm
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Originally posted by theguy Wow, my words are powerful. Now give him a tophat and a bowtie.m'kay EDIT:
done
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Posted By: HiyuKantaro
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 6:55am
becuase the top of the face is light flesh coloured. it looks like he has a beard on the bottom of his face, and it looks like he has hair all over his body
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Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 6:58am
so darken the skin mid tone basically ok.
 not much changed just the pallette and a tiny bit of how I shded the face
EDIT: CRAP! I just saw what leel said so here
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 9:05am
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get. rid. of. the. huge. ass. canvas. ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 9:31am
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mhm you're getting there, but you have way too many colors. Honestly jeans aren't that shiny and all the highlighting made his thighs look like a doughnut! XP ------------- |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 10:21am
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Originally posted by Homer
Mmmmm thigh doughnut 
anywho heres the latest update
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 11:47am
 bent legs? ------------- |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:00pm
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ok I will redo the knees  I like this version better
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:23pm
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Originally posted by theguy ok I will redo the knees I like this version better I do not.. Now he is standing like some very dump person.. Not like he is ever going to move and take action.. I like leel's edit.. That also removes something of the symetry... |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:34pm
| have you played marvel ultimate alliance? if not then you don't know his stance |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 12:47pm
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Originally posted by theguy have you played marvel ultimate alliance? if not then you don't know his stance His stance in game doesnt matter! Creating art is not about mimic others, creating art is about CREATING.. so you can CREATE your OWN better stance, or atleast let your artistic feelings go over, to choose for the best stance....!! Like this one.. this one is pretty cool :) http://images.buycostumes.com/mgen/merchandiser/21510.jpg somee other nice poses: http://www.marveldirectory.com/pictures/individuals/w_3d/wolverine.gif http://www.silverbulletcomics.com/~jennyg/writers/fowler/wolverine14.JPG http://www.marveldirectory.com/pictures/individuals/w_1d/wolverine5.gif http://www.internationalhero.co.uk/w/wolverine3.jpg |
Posted By: Kfuchoin
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 1:08pm
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try other stances. i don't liek that one =/
here you the most popular wolverine stance
 this was not made by me!
full sprite sheet:
http://www.panelmonkey.org/sprite.php?id=326&theme=3 - www.panelmonkey.org/ ------------- may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903 |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 1:43pm
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I shall use the top link in lolliges bpost EDIT: but first I'm gonna finish off a peice of pixel art (I've only just finished about a quarter of it and it took 3 hours long so don't expect me too be done soon
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Posted By: NuffinInMyMuffin
Date Posted: 28 May 2007 at 3:00pm
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On the shirt, it seems that he is really realyy buff and beefy. But unless the shirt is uber tight it wouldn't define his muscles like that. |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 12:40am
| are talking about mine? |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 3:25am
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Originally posted by Lollige I only edited one leg, to make a point without doing all his work.I like leel's edit.. That also removes something of the symetry... ------------- |
Posted By: Kfuchoin
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:16am
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look at leels edit... because right now his legs are a mess... try to make what leel did, =) ------------- may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903 |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:18am
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the whole points of edits is too point you in the right direction not to make you copy what the edit was ------------- |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:35am
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Originally posted by theguy the whole points of edits is too point you in the right direction not to make you copy what the edit was holy crap. first new person in A LOOOOOOOONG time to finally get it! good going! ------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Kfuchoin
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 6:42am
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Originally posted by theguy
i know, but follow leel's edit, make soemthing like that.. bbecause right now the legs are a mess..the whole points of edits is too point you in the right direction not to make you copy what the edit was ------------- may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903 |
Posted By: Feron
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 9:18am
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Originally posted by Kfuchoin
because right now the legs are a mess.. not just the legs.... ------------- hmmmm. |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 9:54am
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sorry, but this guy looks like a son goku with claws, not like wolverine. ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 10:06am
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Originally posted by Metaru
sorry, but this guy looks like a son goku with claws, not like wolverine. Metaru is right.. I think you should take a look at other wolverine art, and take a look at the body.. he has a very wide chest, huge shoulders, normal hips etc... Take a look again at this picture...  Now put THAT body into those new clothes.. but those new clothes look stupid I think... But ok thats your choise.. you can change a some1's look, but you cant change his body... In your version I dont see those large shoulders, and his hair is pretty weird too.. In this version he just has a mask, thats why its pointy etc.... but that doesnt mean the hair does the same... |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 10:32am
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it's not my choice it's my freinds I don't like that costume either but your know, and actually his hair is like any way ------------- |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 10:35am
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Originally posted by theguy it's not my choice it's my freinds I don't like that costume either but your know, and actually his hair is like any way Its your art isnt it? WHy dont you make the choises than?And im shure his body is the same.. Cant you post some screenshots of that game with wolverine? I can find alot of screenshots but not with wolverine.. THe only usefull thing I have found now is this: http://membres.mezimages.com/image/manuneo/playstation%203/marvel-ultimate-alliance-1030.jpg OLD OUTFIT! |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 12:06pm
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http://wiimedia.ign.com/wii/image/article/748/748762/marvel-ultimate-alliance-20061201060449340.jpg - http://wiimedia.ign.com/wii/image/article/748/748762/marvel-ultimate-alliance-20061201060449340.jpg new outfit that is wolverine in the first costume you get along with the things first costume and everyone elses aswell! ------------- |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 29 May 2007 at 12:12pm
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Originally posted by theguy http://wiimedia.ign.com/wii/image/article/748/748762/marvel-ultimate-alliance-20061201060449340.jpg - http://wiimedia.ign.com/wii/image/article/748/748762/marvel-ultimate-alliance-20061201060449340.jpg new outfit that is wolverine in the first costume you get along with the things first costume and everyone elses aswell! Ok nice screenshot.. Now look at him.. He has huge shoulders, his pose is like he is going to take action, and his clothes are pretty tight.. If he had tight pants your version the legs should be way thinner.. and your clothes look very loose... And his belt is pretty low too.. Now do the same in your image than :) |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 30 May 2007 at 2:19am
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actually I'm gonna redo it that would take way too much editing to do and it would look like a different peice, but this time I'm using a simpler style. ------------- |