Random buildings:
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4512
Printed Date: 30 September 2025 at 8:18am
Topic: Random buildings:
Posted By: Zladco
Subject: Random buildings:
Date Posted: 25 June 2007 at 9:08pm
I'm new here , just wondering what do you guys think about my WIP? Comments including how to improve my work are appreciated:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/58284952/ - http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/58284952/
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Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 25 June 2007 at 9:13pm
more contrast and some actual texturing could realy benefit this peace, I think.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 25 June 2007 at 9:19pm
What do you mean? Like bricks and stuff or different color tones?
EDIT:: Just did a little update, the two things on the right are buildings i'm working on.
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Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 25 June 2007 at 9:56pm
both. stuff like bricks, more detailed cracks and debris and also sort
of like a gradient ( but aparently NOT a gradient from a gradient tool.
more like lower parts of a wall are shaded a bit darker.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 25 June 2007 at 10:53pm
Won't too much of that make it look like a run-down building though?
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Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 25 June 2007 at 11:41pm
yes it would look like it, if it would be overdone, but used scarce could give some interesting results.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 12:23am
I just updated the picture, does it look any better? worse? what else could it use.
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Posted By: eckered
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 5:09am
in the yellow building and orange building, change the windows to the way you have the other ones.
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 8:56am
http://www.photobucket.com - photobucket is your friend.
As are [img] tags.
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Posted By: eckered
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 8:59am
but dont hotlink from deviantart :O
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 9:56am
The perspective of the yellow building is all sketchy.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 12:15pm
Thanks, what do you mean by sketchy? Also, the gas station looks barren to me, what can I add to it.
Btw, you can make the image bigger by clicking it.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 12:53pm
We're not talking about making the image bigger, you should post it on the forums by uploading it to an image host and the [.img] (w/o period) tags.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 1:00pm
Why? I can see it fine in Deviantart, but here it is:

Can you keep helping me now?
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 2:48pm
The point isn't that we can see it in Deviantart. The point is it's WIP forum for posting your WIPs and it's a lot easier for us/more likely for us to critique it if you put it in the actual post.
You liked the thumbnail image, not the actual image. Use the very very last link on image shack and put the [.IMG][/IMG.] (w/o the period) tags around it.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 2:57pm
Alright already! The Deviantart image is just fine, it even loses quality when I use an image hoster, just deal with it or don't help me, you guys were helping me just fine, I don't have to go thru this hard process. 
The quality in Deviantart is the same I used to save the picture.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:15pm
OMG, what the hell are you made of? 10 kinds of stupid and 50 kinds of lazy? It doesn't take that much effort and internet knowledge to post a friggin image, ffs.
It takes less to load the image onto imageshack than it does to DeviantArt. If you can't spend 2 seconds loading it and posting the right link, then you're hardly cut out for the time consuming, meticulous, detail oriented form of art that is pixel.
stop being a crybaby n00b and just post the image.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:21pm
1. Do people get banned/warned here for flaming? they should.
2. I do have the patience for pixel art since it's something I enjoy doing, I do NOT have the patience to post an image that is already posted in full quality.
3. No it doesn't, atleast not for me, I uploaded it in Deviantart much faster, 2 seconds? don't make me laugh.
4. I won't, it's fine as it is.
What kind of forum is this anyway, I can't even copy and paste.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:27pm
1. Not when the people they are flaming are being lazy/stupid/whiny/all of the above/etc./you.
2. In case you haven't noticed, grand master pixel genius, the forum is equipped with a code that lets us zoom in on an image when we click on it (which deviantart Doesn't have) so we don't have to copy/paste things into whatever program and zoom in that way. We actually like to SEE the pixels. THAT's why we like people to post the images. Cause it makes us easier for us to critique sh*t. What would be the point in them taking the extra time to add the f**king code onto the forum if everyone just linked to f**king deviantart? (and not to mention, linking to deviantart just gives you extra page views. can we say deviantWHORE?).
3. Deviantart takes forever. You have to click on a category, preview image, keywords, etc. etc. Image shack takes half the time. Click the file upload. All you have to do is READ which links are for where and which is the image and not the THUMBNAIL. It takes half the time and half the effort, and it lets us click and zoom on the image.
4. Fine. Be a douche.
(leel you where right. kudos).
EDIT: This forum is the kind of forum people with two brain cells can use. It's REALLY not that hard. Basic BBCode. It's no different from the thousands of other phpBB forums out there.
Now. Stop being stupid and just post the image and we can get on with the crits.
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:30pm
I Summon you... oh Ensellitis...
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On Topic: oh my.. what a retard one we got! did you ever read dA's Terms? is not an imagehosting service kind, you CAN'T link an image from deviantART, THAT'S WHY it is a gallery.
you have a problem, seriusly. n00b.
doesn't even worth our time to watch this... thing.
STFU n00b
whats wrong with this kind of people? is that hard to be a person and act like that?
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:32pm
1. (I won't even respond to this).
2. I don't have to know everything about this website, i'm new.
3. It takes forever for you maybe.
4. I will.
I'm willing to follow the directions to improve the picture, but I just can't/don't want to post it there.
We can work like this or not work at all, it's that simple.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:36pm
1. You just did. DUH.
2. I didn't say you had to know anything about it. But isn't it BLATANTLY obvious to you, if you looked at more than one post in the WIP forum that NO ONE here posts deviantART links? And we have a list of image hosts if you ever needed to know it and you could have just ASKED how to post images if you didn't know. Or even read the BBCode FAQ. Dear GOD, it's not rocket science. I mean, come on. You seriously cannot be this stupid.
3. Oh please. Grow the hell up.
4. Good, and while you're at it, go outside and play a nice game of hide and go f**k yourself.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:37pm
1. I didn't respond to your particular answer, just like you see a ((no response)) sort of answer.
I had a cool attitude until you people told me to post it there.
See my edited post.
VVV Why? because i'm not following the particular direction to post it there? it's the only thing i'm not willing to follow.
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:40pm
Originally posted by Zladco
I'm willing to follow the directions to improve the picture, but I just can't/don't want to post it there.
We can work like this or not work at all, it's that simple.
did you ever think about what you say?
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okay Aleiav, calm down. don't follow his stupid game.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:44pm
Or you can act like a dumbass and everyone not only not give you crits, but they'll most likely just post to mock you until someone locks the thread. It's that simple.
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You know what? f**k it.
THERE. AND OMG IT TOOK SOOOOO LONG. FFS, get a grip.
And since you want 'em, here's some crits for you:
1. JPG is bad for pixel art. Save as a GIF or PNG. If you need further explanation as to why it's bad, ask.
2. By sketcky I mean it's not in perspective. The roof is not the same as the base of the building.
3. Your colors are way saturated. Tone them down a bit.
4. I suggest you post each building in an individual image with transparency. The white background is annoying.
5. Your trees could use some leaf texture. Try drawing bunches of leaves as a sort of pattern to create the ball of the tree. That's much better than a massive green blob.
Now stop your stupid bitching and pixel.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:46pm
Ok, maybe we can resume now, since you did me the favor.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:48pm
Are you too stupid to see that there's scrollboxes also?
And it's only too big because you're geniusness didn't put them in individual images. Since there's no road system or anything drawing any of these images together, they should each be on their own.
EDIT: Sure we can start now. But next time, don't throw a tantrum like a f**king five year old and do it yourself, jackass. It's ridiculous that I have to post your own images to get you to stfu. What am I going to do next, change your diaper? Grow up. You're lucky I posted the image instead of letting you continue to piss and moan and then letting a mod lock the thread because you don't have two brain cells to rub together.

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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:54pm
Actually I was about to quit.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:54pm
Woah, now that's a big fat surprise. [/sarcasm]
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:57pm
You said I would continue pissing and moaning.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:58pm
Pixel me a river, kid.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 3:59pm
This is a rough beggining, but we will become friends eventually.
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Posted By: FrankieSmileShow
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:01pm
Welcome to pixel joint
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:02pm
I'm sorry. I only make friends with people who AREN'T idiots.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:04pm
I was kidding.
What's wrong with the roof of the yellow building, it's supposed to be curved, or is something uneven with it?
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:05pm
now, can we actually close this thread?
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:06pm
edit: you were kidding? Then that makes two things you suck at. The first one being life.
Glad to see you've stopped bitching.
The perspective of the building looks semi-isometric. It's at an angle. And the top of the roof is drawn at an angle. But the side of the roof closest to the viewer isn't angled at all, neither is the bottom of the building. Hence, it's out of perspective. Either draw it from the side view, no angles, or a top looking over view, with angles.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:10pm
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:11pm
Okay. It looks like this thread is going to the land of Locksley for vacation.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:11pm
Someone close this please.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:12pm
The next person who posts is GHEY.
HAHA Zladco is ghey.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:14pm
We all agree.
This is my last post/topic btw, i'm going to the land of locksley too, just came here because the guys at deviantart haven't answered a topic yet.
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:17pm
no one is going to sonny, good luck anyway.
now, all, let's have a big group hug and smiley together!
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Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:18pm
Note to self: Don't piss Aleiav off
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:20pm
(I ain't that scary Hatch)
The next person who posts is GHEY squared.
haha Zladco is now ghey to the power of two.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:20pm
I'll miss you guys. 
Sort of the same, you get locked out from here.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:23pm
Aww, you learned how to post images all by yourself!
They grow up so fast.
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Posted By: Zladco
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:25pm
Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:25pm
Yeah, but he's still just hotlinking and stealing someone else's bandwidth
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:27pm
Damn. He's only learned to lie then.
They really DO grow up fast. >.<
Zladco, give me your robe and please leave Hell's Kitchen.
now THAT was a joke.
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 26 June 2007 at 4:42pm
closed because stupidity begets stupidity... now gtfo before you drag others down to your level
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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