First mockup
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 15 June 2026 at 11:06am
Topic: First mockup
Posted By: Mindiell
Subject: First mockup
Date Posted: 04 July 2007 at 4:55am
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This mockup piece is based on great Marco Vale's tutorial.
I used the v18 of the http://pixel-arts.org/pixelation/index.php?topic=4306.0 - 16 colors palette from Arne . I've not finished it yet (since it's a WIP  ), but any C&C would be welcome.
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Posted By: Omegavolt
Date Posted: 04 July 2007 at 11:18am
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Some better definition between grass and sky would be good. Try lowering the saturation of the grass and/or darkening up the lower portion of the sky. ------------- http://www.ongamedev.com/ - OnGameDev |
Posted By: Mindiell
Date Posted: 04 July 2007 at 3:24pm
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In fact, I want to use the strict palette to give Arne some mockups with it. I'll try to use another blue, and the sky is really not finished.
Further, I'll try to break the vertical line which, I think, is not good. ------------- Mindiell French n00b |
Posted By: Mindiell
Date Posted: 05 July 2007 at 4:41am
Omegavolt, I thought about your crit and tried to exchange sky color with the other blue. I think this is better now. Fixed the bad vertical line which broke my tile. And finally, I've tried something on the sky, but I'm not happy with it... ------------- Mindiell French n00b |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 05 July 2007 at 8:41am
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try putting in more dither patters to make a smooth transition... I'd made you an edit but I lost it at the end (Grr!) anyway, just start the dither lower to the ground and then use a lot of patterns to smooth it out edit: oh well, dither is fun, so I did it again:  I like the middle one the most ------------- |
Posted By: Lawrence
Date Posted: 05 July 2007 at 12:15pm
| Remember, a clear sky is always darkest near the top, because there is less atmosphere in a space perpendicular to the earth than there is across the surface. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 05 July 2007 at 7:49pm
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Listen to Lawrence he invented lighting.
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 05 July 2007 at 11:13pm
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right, of course. I was just talking about the dithers >_> Of course. ------------- |
Posted By: Mindiell
Date Posted: 06 July 2007 at 5:50am
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I put the sky back without dithering, I'll work on this later.
I tried some clouds to...  ------------- Mindiell French n00b |