Hut Lineart
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Topic: Hut Lineart
Posted By: Saint Minor
Subject: Hut Lineart
Date Posted: 03 August 2007 at 9:14am
Hey! I'm just after some C&C to improve this, before i begin colouring.
I'm really not happy with the roofing. I think you can tell what i'm trying to acheive, but unfortunetly it hasn't worked out. 
Cheers, Saint Minor

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Posted By: Saint Minor
Date Posted: 04 August 2007 at 7:26pm
Nothing?
Please, i'd really like to make this the best it can be before i start colouring.
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 August 2007 at 9:01pm
Hey Mr. Impatient, just start coloring, fix the lines as you go.
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Posted By: Sasuke-ish
Date Posted: 04 August 2007 at 9:16pm
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I agree With Jalon it usually works out if you just start coloring you'll see if somethings wrong as you go.
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Posted By: AdrianJensen
Date Posted: 04 August 2007 at 10:31pm
The left side of the roof looks a little low.
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Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 05 August 2007 at 1:13am
Hello Saint Minor,
In case you are going for 'standard' perspective I would suggest that you take a larger canvas and put the image on it. Then draw lines from the bottom of the building to the left top of the larger canvas.
On that line you take your first vanishing point.
Usually that is the same height as the eye of the
viewer. So if you want a slightly upperview
of the building the vanishing point is above the
building.
Draw all the horiziontal lines to this point.
Let me show you a DRAFT of how you could do it:

Please notice that a lot of your lines are not going to the same vanishing point. There are more rules but this is one of the basic ones that needs to be followed.
Good luck.
Best regards from
M.E.
Edit: Very well spotted MashPotato .. The horizon is where the eyes of the viewer are .. In my example (which was extreme draft :) ) the horizon is more of a diagonal.....
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Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 06 August 2007 at 9:22am
Also note that in M.E.'s example, the horizon is not horizontal, which makes things a little more complicated since that means the viewer's head is tilted. It may be easier to choose 2 vanishing points on a horizontal line, so you don't have to worry about things looking skewed 
Disclaimer: I am often confused by perspective myself 
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Posted By: Saint Minor
Date Posted: 08 August 2007 at 10:23am
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Thanks everbody for your analysis, however i've decided to put this on hold for now, and come back to it at a later date.
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