WIP: Fate
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 25 February 2026 at 4:59am
Topic: WIP: Fate
Posted By: morfius
Subject: WIP: Fate
Date Posted: 14 August 2007 at 3:47am
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Here's a WIP which i've been working on which sees the inhabitant of a planet meeting its end through various means. I would love to have some advice on what I can do to improve its quality and possibly even put it on par with some of the better pieces out in the gallery.    |
Replies:
Posted By: Kingy
Date Posted: 19 August 2007 at 7:04am
| Looks good but the meteor needs some transparency with the background to distinguish the flame from the actual meteor. and as i said before smooth the edges of the guy into the background so they are not as sudden a jump. |
Posted By: Kimau
Date Posted: 19 August 2007 at 7:30am
   Just look at how the rock is separate from the trail. Maybe reuse some colours used on the rocket. Possibly move the flame trail up on the Rocket by a pixel of two. |